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11-01-04, 02:43 PM
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Still Spectacular, Yes!
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Da Bluez
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2nd Poem
The Blues Are Back And Longing For A Soothing Sound Or A Flamboyant Roar A Confused Soul That's Seeking Truth Shall Find Solace In Their Own Blues
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11-01-04, 05:35 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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your vocab is great, try to make your poems contain more,and put some time into em,i think they would be a lot better, nice job...1, oh and 3 poems on a page is the limit, because a lot of people like to get their work up as well.........but i appreciate your talent..1
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11-02-04, 01:47 PM
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Good vocab. Too short. Rhyming would be nice as well, but it is not necessary. Just put more time into it.
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rap4 ( P ) Pronunciation Key (rp) n. Slang: A form of popular <a href="http://www.ntsearch.com/search.php?q=music&v=56">music</a> developed especially in African-American urban communities and characterized by spoken or chanted rhyming lyrics with a syncopated, repetitive rhythmic accompaniment. ^Don't forget the white man^ Poetic Scriptures poems: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157364 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157462 |
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