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11-01-04, 07:28 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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~Siccness~
IP:
..I'm sick-with-syllables, Black Magik, a twisted-criminal..
..Alwayz 'brewin up trouble' like, witch-rituals.. ..A demented-individual, I come nasty-with-words.. ..rhyme-with-a-vengence, each of my-sentences, are blastin-you-herbs.. ..leave you crashin-and-burnt, who wanna get down-with-a-demon?.. ..Everytime I flow, you choke, like you had a mouth-full-of-semen.. ..Its hell-when-I-speak, I'm evil, like satan dwellin-beneath.. ..I kill-these-kids, by filling-them, with more 'shells-than-the-beach'.. ..to hell-with-emcees, they aint worthy to touch the ground-that-I-walk.. ..with each-word, I'm leaving each-herb, in streets surrounded-by-chalk.. ..kneel down-when-I-talk, matter fact, kiss-the-ring.. ..Leave you fags-ate, call this the 'Shaq-trade', the way I 'split-ya team'.. ..split-ya-spleen, I rock-shows when I come with hot-flows.. man, Im the 'deepest thing to hit the streets since pot-holes'.. ..Im nasty-with-mics, leaving rappers gasping-for-life.. ..Its Magik, leaving more 'scratches', than 'faggots-in-fights'.. ..you get strangled-quick, who the hell let hell's angel-in?.. ..made-to-win, face-it-bitch, I'm dangerous.. ..insane-with-spits, best-free's, who the hell wanna test-me?.. ..who wanna rumble-with-thunder? I'll 'wear-you-out' like 'guess-jeans'.. ..I dont-play, it's no-game when I throw-flames.. ..Dawg I don't-lie, I got more 'dope-lines' than 'cocaine'.. |
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11-01-04, 07:42 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
yo can I get some feed?.......I will return the favor...leave me some...1
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11-01-04, 08:08 PM
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...Jea...
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IP:
yo this shit is tight, i love the punchlines, only about 1 or 2 lines seemed stretched. overall i give it 9/10, also could work on the ending. Should think bout entering a punchline contest. keep it up.
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11-01-04, 08:10 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
thanx dawg...lookin forward to readin some of your shit...1
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11-01-04, 09:39 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
ill...god damn!!!...
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11-01-04, 09:41 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
leave some reel feed you bastard...
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11-01-04, 09:43 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
uppin this bitch
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11-02-04, 02:17 AM
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Flyweight
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IP:
That was fucking
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11-02-04, 02:51 PM
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***cITYSLICka***
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IP:
tight drop.good structure, hot puches, nice wordplay.keep em comin'.
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  I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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11-02-04, 03:37 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
thanx yall...uppin...1
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11-02-04, 09:22 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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uppin for more feedback on this bitch...quit sleepin yall...damn
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11-02-04, 09:44 PM
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New to RB
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IP:
That was tight dun. Punchlines, struture, flow, everything. I'd give you a 9/10. Lookin' forward to readin' some more of your pieces.
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