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If yall only knew how bad it feels
You couldn't continue to show this
Pain and suffering emotions killed
Let out flames from a heart of anguish
See the fire run through my veins
Hear the torturing sounds
Lists of solutions where nothings gained
I can watch my life go down
Down that path of terror and fright
Not knowing what can have its way
Sensing a sprit so dark at night
Winning the battle of the heart that paid
The enviroment has settled down now
And I become a child of God
For I was lost and now Im found
Having relations growing fond...

By: Paul Jay Adams

yo that was a good flow nice piece
what did you just get saved or something
yo Iam mixed up is it a religious piece or just a flow of emotions.1

its kinda both... and naw ive been saved but i go into others thoughts and crap. thanks for postin

hey dude, ur back... ne way, nice peice, i liked this one alot... the flow was awesome, the vocab was good, and the emotions were raw and thouro... fave lines:

See the fire run through my veins
Hear the torturing sounds
Lists of solutions where nothings gained
I can watch my life go down

nice peice again... keep it flowin

yo son ur shyt wass poppn. flow was weak. but keep postin. uno

good piece...just solid all the way through....short yet so well put....respect....