[COLOR=DarkGreen][FONT=Arial Black][SIZE=4]Check this... Give feedback if you want and anyone who wants to take this on in a battle, say the word! Im looking for practice.

Stop resting the brood/
Slick, quick, naughty and crude/
WeeDex, regular ladies dude/
before i eat it, i always like to play wiv my food//
MCs for breakfast/ then Rappers for lunch/
to silence the violence il have the true dapper at brunch//
Then dinnertime/ the sun shines start a new rhyme/
slip into something more comfy and pour a glass of wine/
Have your sister and you mother for 5 minute ride/
Slip it inside, while i stretch the legs to their hind//
Scratches on my back, have her hanging from the ceiling/
Lap from her crack, in the sack im a demon!/
Now you know this hold this, scream if your feeling/
The reflex of WeeDex straight from UK-essex!!

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[COLOR=DarkRed][SIZE=4][FONT=Arial Black]See above, i hope i got someones attention!

My battle record aint all that, need practice Whos down wiv that?[/FONT][/SIZE][/COLOR]

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not too great man....im not hatin.....but were are the multis? the wordplay, the metaphors? you just need to elevate man......no hate....just stating the facts

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OPEN MIC............post it in there..........then youll get more feedback

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.:Retired:.