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Old 11-06-04, 11:23 AM   #1
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The hate has widen in scope cats riding on coke like

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The hate has widen in scope cats riding on coke like
Drug addicts, thug static everywhere not even a boat float right
On waters of destruction, borders of corruptions surrounds towns
Want greater powers and straighter towers they all lopsided
Foundation crumbling got a nation stumbling with the slop provided
By a political party a critical body of people for decision making
But religion taking the heart of America in part and character
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Old 11-06-04, 12:49 PM   #2
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Nicely done. Gave me a good visual of what going on with drugs in society today. Like the vocabulary and some of the word play. I took this more as a poetic piece than a rhyme.
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Want greater powers and straighter towers they all lopsided/Foundation crumbling got a nation stumbling with the slop provided
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Old 11-06-04, 01:51 PM   #3
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LyRi-CaLi thanks for the props for real yo
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Old 11-06-04, 02:14 PM   #4
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thats was ok not the best of open-mic but it was ok
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Old 11-06-04, 03:13 PM   #5
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shit man ya flow was smoth and hot to follow
good drop 7.5
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Old 11-06-04, 10:53 PM   #6
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all right thanks for the props on this one for real yall
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