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11-10-04, 10:38 AM
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Taste My Medicine....part I
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So pay attention as i display wordplay on these cowards, crack ya bones outward, give you a shock like usin toasters in showers, who feels my power?duplicate of a legend eatin pussies speech up so watch your words get devoured, inside ya minds, like i commited a mental crime,make ya hearts sublime, pace myself, so "watch" Men~Iz throw ya body into "clocks" just to show you a waste a "time", killin herbs, destroyin ya wordz, your verse has beenn corrupted, cuz my shits blazin like Mt.Vesuvius just erupted, second drop....im jus tryna elevate my skill....feedback peeplez
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11-10-04, 11:32 AM
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not bad...
flow was decent.. word-play was ok.. So pay attention as i display wordplay on these cowards, crack ya bones outward, give you a shock like usin toasters in showers that was preety good... u battle??? if so holla at me throu PM i might have a offer for u.... VIOLENT TYPE... |
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11-10-04, 11:42 AM
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thanks for the feedback
uppin peepz.................
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11-10-04, 11:48 AM
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this was kew...it was jus a lil choppy...but, you definately got tha jist of textin...good use of vocab, wordplay, multis, and metas....i see "legend" potentenial...i was feeling that tha opening...keep it up and elevate yo...
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11-10-04, 11:51 AM
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thanks homie.....more feedback peoples
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11-10-04, 01:07 PM
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Thought this was good......Didnt seem to be choppy to me....
"So pay attention as i display wordplay on these cowards, crack ya bones outward, give you a shock like usin toasters in showers," Good verses..... You had nice metas and great vocab, some good wordplay....short but sweet keep it up |
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11-10-04, 01:08 PM
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thanx may'n......more feedback peoples..............
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11-10-04, 01:49 PM
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feedback.......................................... ...
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11-10-04, 09:53 PM
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wake up................................................ ..
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11-10-04, 11:10 PM
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Good open mic....Topic was good too....Your vocab....and wordplay .....were very good....good open mic for a newb...or you mite just be a talented newb anyways 8/10 on this ....keep up tha good work peace......
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11-10-04, 11:23 PM
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thanks for the feedback fury.....need more peepz......
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11-10-04, 11:27 PM
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tight drop man....it was a lil stretched but i dont think that matters when its packed with multi's and shit....cuz its how i write......flowed great...you sure ur really a newb cuz if so where u been sleepin you def got talent man....bery good multi's and vocab was good wordplay was good too...keep it up man..peace~1
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11-11-04, 01:05 PM
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thanks ryda.....more feedback peoplez..............................
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11-12-04, 09:04 AM
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it was good 8.5/10....part1?.....is u gonna make a part 2or sumthin.....if so then im looking froward to reading it..........1
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11-12-04, 09:14 AM
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good drop.short an' sweet.opener was fire and the rest was gas added to the flame.keep elevatin'......
V.T. uppnn......
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