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11-10-04, 01:31 PM
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Middle Weight
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Drop It Hot For Real
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Drop It Hot For Real
A bad smile is devastation like mild irritation cause skin To itch and smash folks, trash hopes and pauses trend Flows best and molest microphones throw cess at domes Strong words can wrong herds of sheep stress and roam Curve real deep into souls; see nerds that disturb peace Of mind allow the beast to climb into imaginations and feast On the good thoughts, hood caught up into confusion Throttles rap then use a bottle cap to seal it up just an illusion Some sluts gone loco and sweet like a cup of cocoa at Starbucks On computer bazaar and type corrupt ground soft my car stuck Mean nerds are like European bird their wings and bling flaps Part German talk crap like Mark Furman but they cling to rap Oil my quotes then spoil their hopes, chokes with coils of rope Like Clint Eastwood in Hang Em High best tin foil your jokes Filthy gunning and swiftly running like streams with steep banks Got deep blanks in my mind causing screams walk on street planks Love glamour this thug hammer with mandrel my grammar plan fell Now study books ignore cruddy crooks their reputation don’t stand well In and out rumbling affairs true my girl has a becoming hairdo Attractive and vexed active with sex others stumbling can’t compare to Her, lips like a red rose in bedclothes body steamed and aroused In the greenhouse where plants are grown can’t keep my pants on Got a chance to bone dance all night long and the romance strong// My hydraulics pound a nation’s solid foundation pops the rocks That supports its standing in court demanding goods while blocks in shock |
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11-10-04, 06:02 PM
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#2
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Middle Weight
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Upping For Responses
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11-10-04, 08:25 PM
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Banned
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yo honestly what the fuck u be thinking about when u writ these shit???
ya flow be off da hook... thats ya main focus huh?? flow good, multis good N it was RAW... love'in it... 9.93764927 outta 10...... keep'em coming N take me to the lab with ya next time so i could elevate my flow as-well..... |
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12-09-04, 01:14 PM
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to fuckin long so make it shorter
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12-09-04, 01:17 PM
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its good but a bit to long
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12-10-04, 01:07 PM
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Middle Weight
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Hey Yall Thanks For The Props For Real Yo
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12-10-04, 02:22 PM
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Banned: Biting
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Dope Peice Kid, You Be Elivating Quickly Huh, Nice Multis Yo Let Me Come To The Lab As Well, And Blunt And PhatDom, Stop Fucking Around Yall The Same Ppl But Ay Good Shit.....10/10
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12-10-04, 02:45 PM
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yo word that shit was tite..multis were on point..i dunno if you were going for a verse or just some raw shit but i think you should shorten it up a lil..one verse = 16 bars...but that shit was def off tha hook..stay up 1
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12-10-04, 09:20 PM
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#9
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Middle Weight
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Thanks For The Props For Real Yo
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