y is peoples lifes neva da same,but always drama,
and y do people go home,but aint go no momma,
y do people got they ways,but some got a phone,
y do people live in da streets,but some live at home,
and y do they say they dont smoke,but they'll eat some shrooms,
y do pay pay for sex,but some do it for rooms,(place to stay)
y do people carry a knife,but some carry a gun,
and y do they kill for a job,but some kill for fun,
y when they asked to do sumthin,they lie and say its allready done
y when da police come,y do they run,
and y do people think low of em,but otha's think they top of da shelf,
y do people share,but otha's only care about they self,
y am i ritin dis rap up on da internet,
and y are there kids at home dat aint ate dinner yet,

ey yall dats all i got rite now get at me

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pretty decent.....you couldve gotten a little bit more into depth with your emotions....it was alrite tho'

6/10

stay up

return tha favor <<<<<<<<< http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160141

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it was okay...but a little too simple to guess what the next line is gonna be...

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yo you were good but it still needs improvement. battle and that'll help you in every way. return da favorr in my sig.

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Back.....

it was aight...i was kinda feelin it...7/10...

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