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Old 11-14-04, 08:12 AM   #1
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"..Gore.."

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People Feel Repulsed By The Sickness Of My Imagination
I mean, Gore Provide's a answer in every Situation
Make the Most of Anything that Come's To Hand
Household Item Used as a Weapon, ain't so Bland
If a Nigga Come up to you and Say's "Empty Ya Pocket's"
Don't be Shook Reply "Ima Put a Banger In each of ya Eye Socket's"
Incise Ya Side With Garden Plyer's & Wire ya Ball's up ta Cable Wire's
Spill Hydrolhic acid on ya Skin and watch it spread Like a Forest Fire
Rip ya Teeth out of ya Gum's and Clamp them on ya Testicle's
Abduct ya Wifey and Operate On Her..Like we Extra-Terrestrial's
Crack ya Fingernail's and Make ya Swallow Em Whole________
Release a Feast Of Petrol Drenched Locust's To Eat Ya Soul________
Stab Ya Knee Cap's With Rusty Blunt Butter Knife's
Leave ya In a Blood Dipped Heap Laughing, while we Ride By
So any of ya Fucka's Wanna Try and Challenge ..:Outbreak:..
Remember That Your gonna be another Victim to Rape....

I felt like Typing...
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Old 11-14-04, 09:53 AM   #2
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Old 11-14-04, 10:24 AM   #3
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it's a peace of shit....
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Old 11-14-04, 10:28 AM   #4
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it's a peace of shit....

Thank You....Herb...
Upping for a Non-Herb to Give feedback...and Sinner just stop Rapping you Fag.. Or Battle Me...
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Old 11-14-04, 10:37 AM   #5
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dont worry about sinner his accent on his audio is a piece of shit...

it was pretty good if it was your first written keep going,
Incise Ya Side With Garden Plyer's & Wire ya Ball's up ta Cable Wire's
Spill Hydrolhic acid on ya Skin and watch it spread Like a Forest Fire

^favorite bar of the verse...you got good vocab and complexity

peace
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Old 11-14-04, 10:41 AM   #6
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Lol...I wanna Battle Sinner...

Thanx For The Feedback and it was a little freestyle...
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Old 11-14-04, 10:45 AM   #7
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aight then it was good if it was a free, u new or this is jus an alias?
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Old 11-14-04, 10:47 AM   #8
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I'm New _____________You wanna Gore Battle?
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Old 11-14-04, 11:18 AM   #9
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son who wanna battle da kid
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Old 11-14-04, 11:20 AM   #10
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yo outbreak chill cuz i dont think ur dat nice bluffin n shit
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Old 11-14-04, 11:28 AM   #11
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^lol mercy hes better then you jus shh before you get your first loss....look at your rhymes...then look at his
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Old 11-14-04, 02:24 PM   #12
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Old 11-14-04, 04:35 PM   #13
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aiiiiiight its an ok "free"

da flow was messed up in some parts and u had some good vocab

but dont try to stretch ya lines it's messing up da flow

but anyway good vocab nice rhyme scheme

i give u

7/10 work on da flow
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Old 11-15-04, 01:52 PM   #14
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Old 11-15-04, 06:19 PM   #15
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goddamn your violent lol........it was cool drop some feed on mine....the declining of rap....good shit mayne.....7.5 or 8/10...kepp em cummin..........~1~
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