10-12 lines
blind spits
due 45 min after check in
no hate
no crew
no d/r
no biting
no recycling

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-17-04 at 05:28 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Elemental Soul has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 05:29 PM.

Verbally Gifted has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 05:30 PM.

I should start callen u broken glass,cuz u must be on crack,
It don't matter if ya verbally 'gifted',you still cant 'wrap',
His lines are simple,plain like a lepper with no spots
And this bitch is comen outta the blue like retired cops
You could live in an ice cave,and u still wouldn't be cool
Have u like fat joe,cept ill make u lean back on a stool
Ill vut you up into four images,have u like McFoley(WWE)
Only way he'll be gifted by god is if i left verbal holy
Soul's punches'll break ya mouth,maken ya change ya name
Make u scream pain like kurt cobain,have u shoot ya own brain
My flame MEL'ts you like water hitten them aliens in signs
So now how u gonna make it clap,if you cant busta rhymes

I'll kill this herb, Im wheelin in verbs, shield ya nerves...
Cause being "Pharell" is the only way Ill "FEEL THIS NERD"...
Most of ya verse is played, but ya still gonna "lose-me"...
Cuz V.G. takin' you out, like the water in Fat Joe's "jacuzzi"...
Better off Joining "the INC." But i Choke Chiors...
note:Get a Job Bitch Cause every 5 Seconds ya Post's Higher...
Its elemental, easily the most wackest on the planet...
With punches so stretched, you got to scroll to understand it...
Pardon, but if you were watchin ur first porn, you still cudn’t ‘cum hard’ then...
So I ‘Eat This Emcee’, easier than lightweight meals at the olive gard-en...
No respect, the lowest form of lightweight skill…shown on rapverse yet...
If your verse was edited by a teacher, you still wouldn’t come correct...

uppin.......leave links ill return the favor

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Voted For: Verbally Gifted

vg won...this was cuz he came harder and had better punches..Elemental's punches were wack...both people needed to improve they vocab...could've been a closer battle if elemantal wouldve came harder and had better punches...but this clearly goes to verbally gifted,,,he did better in every category

Voted For: Verbally Gifted

Verbally Gifted: first bar was okay you had a good attempt on wordplay I have to say also it was....slightly effective. 2nd bar was played and not that well done. 3rd= is played again pretty fake personal due to the fact you can't do another post until 30 seconds after.4th bar isn't true....AGAIN but good attempt. 5th bar was decent but the first part of it was played again. final bar was okay.
overall: 6/10

Elemental Soul: first bar was decent. but lines like that I see everyday. 2nd bar was okay nice attempt. 3rd= I find it very odd you both used fat joe lines LMFAO but V.G's attempt was much better. 4th bar was really self-glorification in my humble opinion. 5th bar was part self-glorified but it was sort of a punch. final bar....in the first line you glorified yourself once again and the 2nd line was hellllla played and that payed dearly. overall: 4.5/10

vote: VG

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Voted For: Verbally Gifted

u got this one on lock fam nice drop good structure and verbals beat him up nice punches kid u handed him his ass in this battle keep uppin man nice job he jus fell short on vocab and punches thats what i based this one on
vote in one of my battles
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=162918
or gainst terror2005 thnx man

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Battle stats 3-0
KO'S
Weedex
Terror 2005
Wreckk

KINGDIPSET-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162918
WRECKK
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162997

Reppinn...................Retro-Bution.................

Voted For: Verbally Gifted

This was hot! You both had some nice wordplay and vocab in there. Punches and personals were hardhitting in both verses! Hot drop! Damn, it's hard to decide but uhmmm, i'ma go with Verbally Gifted...
Elemental Soul : loved those 4 first lines, the bomb...the verse got a little weaker towards the ending but still nice drop!
Verbally Gifted: damn, when i looked at your first line i was like: oh no...but then, bam...you kept on hitting hard with those punches. It's opposite of Elemental Soul, i loved your 4 last lines and since i always remember the closing lines because i believe they should be the best, my vote goes to Verbally Gifted but was a close one!!!

Please return the favor...(honestly)

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Voted For: Verbally Gifted

well 1 sided battle........................

VG-
came good had nice flow it went tho well rhymes were good some u didnt do but nvm nice punches n little personals came good nice verse came good al the way stuckture was a bit of nut still was good

ES-
was good came alright had good flow and rhymes some punches and no peronsals was all good also stuckture was on and all that punches were a little weak butthere we go

hip-hop-sum-up-
both came good but VG came a little hard and had good flow a punches and that he get me vote it was 1 sided ES didnt ocme that hard but it was alright not the best of verses by ny.......

v/ VG