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11-15-04, 08:11 AM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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Calamity - Feat. SevenThird and Fara "Movin On" - Peep this shit!!
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www.soundclick.com/seventhird .... song title matches thread title... not 100% finished, but who knows when it will be so lookin for some feedback.
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11-15-04, 08:18 AM
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...Belong...
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Ok this feedback is while im listening to the song 1st nice beats...1st cat nice rhymes quality real good...nice rhymes and flow on point...hook wow who is she???...2nd verse nice this is a nice beat...the rhymes are coo...flows decent...hook again i like her
 ...3rd verse still on point flowing coo a lil faster i like it...rhyming coo...hmm she back...oo a 2nd time dope...this beats cool im guessin im nearing the end of the track so i'd give this a 7.5/10 this was a nice chilled beat wit the vocals strong on point and the hook too was wow...keep it up fam
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11-15-04, 08:23 AM
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All did very nicely on this one. Flow was all good, some of the vocals sounded young from people, but other then that they were good. Lyrics were nice.
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11-15-04, 05:03 PM
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Thanks for the feed guys..
Verse 1 - Calamity Hook- Fara Verse 2- SevenThird Hook- Fara Verse 3- Calamity Hookblahblah- Fara she did her thang.. so did seven ... upping ... word
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11-15-04, 09:08 PM
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Wtf.............
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11-16-04, 11:47 AM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP:
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word you two need to speak.
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11-15-04, 09:13 PM
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awesome basically all i can say one of the hottest tracks on rv righ now... calam killed it and i can relate to the track completely love the wobblin brain line... cant get over that track tight shit fam 9.9/10
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11-21-04, 10:15 PM
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uppin for any feedback you wanan give
.. im prolly gonna change the song in a while.. .. gonna add someone elses verse in there.. woord ?
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11-21-04, 10:32 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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yea, this shit was dope, it was heartfelt, great lyrics,,dope hook...and made me sad..lol....that is all....1
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11-21-04, 10:35 PM
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IP:
lol sad
 .. i wanan make you happy .. i'll make you a happy song.. just for you
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11-21-04, 10:57 PM
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i agree wit saraan..... this shit is pretty dope.... real good beat for this type of song.... and the first guy (calam) really goes well with this beat (his voice) and his quality is real good..... pretty nice hook.... everythin in this song really works together... prolly the most well put together song........ woah.. WTF?!?!? Jin juss came on the track... lmao... calam all of a sudden sounded alil like tha mc to me..... this song is pretty dope.... 9.5/10
i gotta alil suggestion tho.... wen that hook comes in at the end (maybe only the second time) have her start singin the shit in the background and tryna hit some notes.... like they do in some commercial shit. like repeatin wat was juss sed in the hook a beat later ( i get the feelin im not explainin this shit well) U gave all u had but it wasnt enough (U GAVE ALL u HAd) I gave wat i had but it wasnt enough (I GAve it All) I believed in u, but u proved me wrong (believed in U, but i was wrong) Now there aint nothin left, so im movin on (Nothin, nothin left) sum shit like that........ FUCK IT, im stupid anywyas please drop feed \/ \ / \/ \ / \/ in the sig |
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11-21-04, 11:08 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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Just Got Done Listening.. Nice Flow Calamity....Voice Sounds A LiL Young In Dis One Like LiL Bow Wow...But Thats Aight...You Still Performed Tight On Dis.. The Hook Was Ok....Singer Needs A Little More Work With Vocals but I Could Never Sing Like That So No Hate...Do Ya Thang Ma.. Seven Did His Thing...Nice Flow With A Change of Direction Was Nice... Fresh Style Throughout This...Nice Track...Keep Dropping Ya Thangs. Calamity and Seven Need To Help Me Elevate So Holla. Peep My New Track "Introspection" ~R~ |
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11-22-04, 11:06 PM
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IP:
lmao @ fuxjustaword...i was feelin that explanation man,you aint stupid.....1
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11-23-04, 09:51 PM
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hullabaloser
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Who's Fara ?
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