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11-16-04, 03:14 PM
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..::shut the fuck up::..
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Lifes A Challenge
IP:
we have a generation of fucked up people still in there youth we all h8 fake people like watchin eastenders it's human abuse We live on in this world and don't share our point of views all we do is fuckin live on earth and watch peeps die on the news it's pretty anoying to just watch everyone in this world suffer it' make you feel utter sickened by all this shit and mutter But what can we do there is nothing in this world thats good if I had the powers of god i'd blow it up if I fuckin could But anyway thats life iit's fucked up it'll always fuck ya days do you really think god wants us to sing in a book of praise? nope it's like a game we are all in here to cry die and feel pain our brains can't take so much stress we all start goin insane I might flow dark but shit always my words are from the heart people don't respect me cause they feel the energy that I start |
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11-16-04, 03:35 PM
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New to RB
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IP:
thats was pretty dope.......dark......still madd simple though......try throwin in more multis and diff. rhyme concepts......switch the flow around peace
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11-16-04, 03:40 PM
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IP:
I didn't want to throw multies in this one i had a few not many.... I actually could do with a few other tips cause sometimes i see peeps rhyme 3 lines together but I didn't know you could do that can someone help me out on that please... peace
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11-16-04, 03:55 PM
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.Retro-Bution.
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IP:
Here we go Sinner Begging for mo' Help........You Juss can't elevate Nigga...
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11-17-04, 01:44 AM
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Better than you..
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IP:
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heh heh heh...........!
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