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Old 11-19-04, 05:25 AM   #1
Triple_N
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New Jonit!!!!!!!!!!peep It!!!!!!!!!!!!

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yo what up everybody....this is a track I laid down on a laptop wit a shure mic, and the shit came out alrite, I'm still on the road but I'm a be back in 3 weeks at the most....yo I will be back a a few days to post feed on other tracks for sure so don't close this shit


Title: Comes & Goes

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Old 11-19-04, 05:33 AM   #2
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Id like to give you some constructive criticism... but theres nothing wrong with this track... word...

keep droppin... I think we all look forward to ya next joints.
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Old 11-19-04, 07:44 AM   #3
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word.. this shit is tight.. i love that beat to death.. god DAMN... who ever made that beat with that sample.. omg..... that beat is fucking sick that sample sets it off.. nice flow.. that shure is good as fuck hehe..good quality.. good job.. -1
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Old 11-19-04, 08:21 AM   #4
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word.. this shit is tight.. i love that beat to death.. god DAMN... who ever made that beat with that sample.. omg..... that beat is fucking sick that sample sets it off.. nice flow.. that shure is good as fuck hehe..good quality.. good job.. -1


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Old 11-19-04, 07:51 AM   #5
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Nice beat this is a dope beat ironically it reminds me of a Jackson 5 beat

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Id like to give you some constructive criticism... but theres nothing wrong with this track... word...

keep droppin... I think we all look forward to ya next joints.


Same as what i woulda said...rtf on my latest song or in my latest battle where ever
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Old 11-19-04, 10:25 AM   #6
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*listening*

Feeling the beat.......sample was nice. Went well with the beat. You sound like you're holding back a little in the beginning, but sounds a little more smoother as you go on. Lyrics were alright. Flow was cool, except for those really short lines you did in the beginning of the second verse. Rest was cool. I'm feeling this song. I think with your voice you sound much better on a collab than a solo track because you offer a very nice contrast to any voice seeing how unique yours is. Anyway, production was nice too. I think this may be the best track overall on this site right now
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Old 11-21-04, 04:37 PM   #7
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uppin for some honest feed........................
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Old 11-21-04, 09:08 PM   #8
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How you doin Triple? This beat is dope man, love the sample, yea,this shit made me bob my head...word,man,your delivery on this is dope, solid voice and flow....dope track man...good lyrics too......great job fam
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Old 11-21-04, 11:06 PM   #9
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Iiight... Beats def hott...That sample is on point .. hott shit

Im likin your voice im not sure if it mixes to well with this beat but.. presence is sick... flow is solid...You def got your shit together.. Lyrics is iight..multies is dope....I could bump this....Good shit for sure...

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Old 11-21-04, 11:48 PM   #10
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damn man you come hot everytime...the numba 1...i look up to this MC...
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Old 11-22-04, 12:30 AM   #11
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^^^^^ ohh no....... better find a way to delete that post man..... MAke him take it Back!!! this could quite possible be one of the dopest things uve dropped on this site since ive been here.... better than any of ur battles..... pretty good quality for wat u had to do it with, I dont needa tell u to keep doin ya thing, but keep droppin this hot shit..... try and hit my shit up wen u get back, i need sum good criticism
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Old 11-23-04, 06:18 AM   #12
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beat is hot, there is a rap group in my town in the UK who have that beat on they're album.

their quite tight http://www.blacknwhitemusic.com/

man that shure mic is tight, what model is it?
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Old 11-23-04, 09:16 AM   #13
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This is just a fun track, here to make ya bob ya head...so if u wanna just vibe wit a nice beat, an tight flow, this is the track for you.

damm i cant stop bobin mah head its tight beat is so funcky nice flow an shit lyrics are tight hook is dope even now its sampled suitys tha beat nice track playa
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