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you still cant rhyme... ur HORRIBLE

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My Lines Are ILL yo

you don't have to rhyme all da time you dumass.

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When im spittin Ive got all da mc's havein fits shittin
rymes dat are bringin death upon you wid every words hittin
/\ Wordplay but nothing breathtaking

I'm takin these rap clowns for a lesson of bein mentally torchered
If your still gonna resist the battle picture yourself bein slaughtered
/\ wtf wack

I'm givin you affects so you can pick it up in ya mind and collect
you think u can beat me but you all get squashed up like an insects
/\ played punch

lets find a solusion for all the reasons u h8 me come to a conclusion
Bitches when I listen to your music it's like causing me ear pollusion
/\ slight punch nothing special again

So remember bitch I don't wanna here anything you gotta spit
If you think your the shit u need to be cut up wid some whips
/\ cut with whips???..no comment

Basically like i said in all my previous comments on ya open mics...improve on punches and wordplay blah blah u heard it before

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List of people who've Ducked Me:
KnightShade
mAtW
Bizzy

u need more practice.ur vocab was good but ur flow was off and some lines were forced.6/10...keep practicin'..

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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE