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11-25-04, 11:51 PM
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Baby Girl...- 2x4
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this was suspsto be for willapeer in a collab but she hasent got time to do ehr verse and when i get my audio rollin im gonna write a new one that flowes better for that audio collab but here yall,,,little poetry...
Baby girl, Don’t get your mind twisted and temptated… I’ll smother you with love so don’t you be frustrated… I hope you send me love back, I think we have a lit spark… I’ll take my mind off my math for are love to embark… Baby girl, I love the way you treat me when we argue… You don’t get to mad, & when its goin down it cant be true… To bad you sometimes step back from me, so whats wrong… Come on we need this to be love baby girl its are song… If you want we can force emotion to show are love… Regenerating by time in this round love circle will begin… And by the end we’ll treat this like a never to be bad sin… |
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11-25-04, 11:58 PM
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wow this was short lol
and I lost the link to our sig  but back to criting Despitethe shortness I will ive this a 8/10 vocab was good,flow was god,bad thing was the shortness lol Like fuckin a freak..keep em comin
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11-26-04, 12:00 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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lol........ill get the link one sec...
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11-26-04, 12:03 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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...walacasheba...
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11-26-04, 12:04 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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^leave feed hoe
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11-26-04, 12:04 AM
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mess with me get cooked
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its aiiiiiiiiiiiiigiht
nuttin too special on this om but i give u an 7/10
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SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!  P.S.A COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM |
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11-26-04, 12:06 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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thats kool
 this is old so i dont care.. |
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11-26-04, 12:20 AM
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Puttin MD On The Map
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short and sweet....tot he point and direct.....keep it comin man...8/10
peace~1
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11-26-04, 12:23 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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^why would i return feed on a battle with no verses posted lol
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11-26-04, 12:25 AM
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Puttin MD On The Map
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my bad lol i posted the wrong link i just pasted what i thought was my OM..
here ya go http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162092 peace~1
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11-26-04, 01:47 AM
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SEE YA AT THE TOP
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werd this was so dope it deserves a 6/10 in some real that sounded like a nelly somg
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11-26-04, 11:23 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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haha 6/10...you should take that back hoe...jsut cuz i put emotion when i write you jealious haha..uppin
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11-26-04, 02:11 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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weerdizzle......
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11-26-04, 02:20 PM
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Sup ok this one nice drop better then the last,
Vocab was uped in this one, used some dope words with nice wordplay.. Flowed nice should sound dope as an audio as a colab with a gurl.. Stay up fam 1~ |
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11-26-04, 02:29 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
yea this was for willapeer me and ehr gonna collab like this...
audio..weerdizzle |
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