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Old 11-25-04, 10:40 PM   #1
Un'Touched
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We As Americans (Remix) Un'Touched,Street Ryda, and Blood Hound

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streetryda:
we are emericans we keep our head high with everlasting pride...
strive to stay alive and make our keep but rules arnt abided by...
decided to ride and take live life for only the single moment...
tone it down or we come vast with armies...
......................us vs your country...yeh we gona own it...
hone it to the battlefeild where we fight like were institutional...
unusual actions and reactions of laws declared unconstitutional...
abusin all the drugs and the availability of them creates problems...
stall them by intercepting shipments,there isnt a way to solve them...
brawlin just to get that food on the table but some arent even able...
unstable and uncapable they live on streets,burn fires and tell fables...
traceable steps lead to the root of the source releasing information...
expectations of jail for that and while thats happenin...
.................................we see soldiors gettin amputations...
replacing the towers that were destroyed by to little foreign boys...
annoyed so we declare war to get revemge and so soldiors are deployed...
so we citizens watch the news of the soldiors abused and get captured...
fractured our spirits but dont fear it cuz the battle wins are statured...

[Chorus]
We as a Americans
Us as a citizen
Gotta protect ourselves
Look at how shit has been
We better check ourselves
Livin up in these streets
Through worse and through better health
Surviving by any means
We as Americans
Us as a citizen
We as Samaritans
What do we get us in
We better check ourselves
Look at how shit has been
Take a look where you live
This is America
And we are Americans.

4blood2hound0:
expected beef when respect is bleak, then I seem to be,
Comin with a vengeance, relentless to an extreme degree,
Im labeled unexplainably and unable to legally shake it,
People with Eagles stop us, cannot just peacefully make it,
Hypocritical politcal individuals influence cuz they famous,
Try to explain to us depicted in a picture they paint us,
Say to us its ya lifestyles fault that ya can't make 8 bucks,
Knowin no info on from which row of houses we came up,
It ain't just the fact that they take us for the bad guy,
Just they fluently speak on us, think that we can just stand by,
And watch? When our hands rise when we picture that flag fly,
Lets just block this criticism out, ima give it a damn try,
Blowin shit out of proportion, and all you can do is spy,
Cuz if you step foot on the white house lawn theres dudes with nines,
So what do you do when shots fly, and the reincarnation of Pac rise,
All I can say is this Emerica, you are welcome to drop by..

[Chorus]
We as a Americans
Us as a citizen
Gotta protect ourselves
Look at how shit has been
We better check ourselves
Livin up in these streets
Through worse and through better health
Surviving by any means
We as Americans
Us as a citizen
We as Samaritans
What do we get us in
We better check ourselves
Look at how shit has been
Take a look where you live
This is America
And we are Americans.

Un’Touched
As I go on manslaughters niggaz thinking I'm sexist..
Make you see red before you leave like a fucking exit..
The wake of my destruction is nothing but damn messes..
All I leave is skeletal remains with necks 'n' chests 'n'..
a lil' debri sprinkled on 'em I warned 'em but no..
They had to talk shit and I flipped true soldier that cuts slow..
Nostradamus-predicted that pain would be-inflicted
Exactly what he-depicted, two towers were shifted
Our path to-leadership is by marking ballots-slips
Propaganda-politics promise us both freedom n-justice
They claim were all living in an even democracy
But wealth versus-poverty don't sound even to-me
Runyon Avunue n American invasions erupted the country
The monarchy corrupted and that's putting it bluntly
Soldiers pushed to the front couldn’t walk given a shunt
Telling kids 'don't try this at home' wars not a 'stunt'
They were js silent n had no say in whether the fought
They was going to war and a cleat lesson had to be taught

[Chorus]
We as a Americans
Us as a citizen
Gotta protect ourselves
Look at how shit has been
We better check ourselves
Livin up in these streets
Through worse and through better health
Surviving by any means
We as Americans
Us as a citizen
We as Samaritans
What do we get us in
We better check ourselves
Look at how shit has been
Take a look where you live
This is America
And we are Americans.
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Old 11-25-04, 10:59 PM   #2
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upupin this shit man lets get some ppl actually leavin feed instead of just peepin it.....
damn
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Old 11-25-04, 11:02 PM   #3
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Old 11-25-04, 11:03 PM   #4
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pretty good.lovin the structure


structure flow and vocab stuck out..wordplay wasn't nccecery here..so it was good..

diggin Streets..though I read it all...

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Old 11-25-04, 11:13 PM   #5
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nice drop,flow is good from all 3,same goes with structure and rhyme's. content is good.
......................us vs your country...yeh we gona own it...
did not like this line, only because I am against america's goverment bullying smaller country's.blaH.

apart from that This is a dope collab.
emerica's finest has a solid foundation now,look's like a crew on the rise.
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Old 11-25-04, 11:19 PM   #6
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thanks for the feedback... I LOVE YOU! haha uppin uppin
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Old 11-25-04, 11:39 PM   #7
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damn fam dat was hott nice flow struc everythin was right on point nice collab dat shows our crew is hott all yall keep droppin
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Old 11-25-04, 11:41 PM   #8
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up up up on all this feed hopin to see more and hopin to see our crew forum up soon too.....but thanks for all the feed so far...keep it comin
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Old 11-25-04, 11:51 PM   #9
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yea thanks for the feed fam

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Old 11-25-04, 11:51 PM   #10
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Hot ,ima Do A Audio For Dis Reppin Da Crew, Andybody Else In Da Crew Got Audio An Wanna Hop On It
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Old 11-25-04, 11:55 PM   #11
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boo @ Untouched for stealin my

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*loses all newfound respect*


Hoe lol
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Old 11-26-04, 12:04 AM   #12
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lol i just saw that shit like 10 minutes ago when i was about to leave some feed back on ya shit lol ill stop homie

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Old 11-26-04, 12:06 AM   #13
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all the verses in this collab was pretty damn hot fa real..bloodhound was hottest ..i jus read it and it flowed nicely like i got the vibe of it...all around hot collab boys...would like to see somthin like this again...
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Old 11-26-04, 12:32 AM   #14
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lov'n this...came ahrd repen your crew or w/e...but this was good emotionally and vocabularyly...good stucture by untouched and blood hound...street ryda ok stucture but your verse put up for it......8.1/10
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Old 11-26-04, 12:36 AM   #15
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up up up up up thanks fam's for all this feed lets get more coming......
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