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Old 11-29-04, 09:02 PM   #1
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Rotten Piss

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Ever since i was introdced to rap music i used it
as a theraputic device plus usin dope to keep me high
i tried to keep that way never had single day where i
was sober so there was evidence in my piss to get
my ass sent to another place to lay my head
fuck id rather be dead stead a doin dead labor
rather lay there in my own bed but fuck it cuz
i though i could clear my piss but god must not
have put me on his clearance list
so clearly i just gave the bitch rotten piss

give me any feedback
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Old 11-29-04, 09:06 PM   #3
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NICE DOING THAT BUT ITS NOT IN THA RULE BOOK....BUT NICE JOB DOING THAT
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Old 11-29-04, 10:30 PM   #4
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what u mean bout tha rules?
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Old 11-30-04, 06:08 PM   #5
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check this shit out and give me back somefeed back
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Old 11-30-04, 08:08 PM   #6
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wasnt really feeling it.....but it was OKAY....i would give it a 5/10....elevate dawg........structure was off and flow was off, and it needed a lil bit more of er'thang...but dont stop,, keep elevating homie...........
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Old 11-30-04, 08:13 PM   #7
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^^word Eastcoast, bit harsh but mostly tru, nice drop man id rate it a lil higher tho- 6.5/10 -- waitin 4 yo nxt pice man........chek sum of ma shit- links in sig
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