K.I.N.G.
my words speak alone like Calderon, with spanish heat//
im not known to speak, im a new clone trapped within a vanished beat//
my lyrics are bred upon the ones who feel them in the chest//
my words are said by the ones that are feelin left possessed//
obsessed fans digest the truth, i sugest you protest to protect the youth//
cuz im lyrically insane, i twist your brain up, till you fell more pain then a wisdom tooth//
My lyrics flow thru .Switch.'s head, and infect him worse then poisonous lead//
id kill him but instead i'd recruit him to the Dark Side he madea choice and said//

.SwitCh.
Shits absurd...come to surprise of a collaboration uprise...
Wit the unknown at the top...the heat stops from gatherin inside...
ill keys..mixtures of the alphabet..prove the sickest...from a-z...
Concoctions invented...n stunned viewers lay dead by these...
Leave Students suprised..of a text education pop quiz...
KING is sick...wait...i ont even no who the fuck that dude is...
Lyrics to hurt minds...leave 6 brain tumors...
Split wits..cuz shits sick..n i dont spread rumors...

iight uppin for votes people, this kind of talent shouldnt get slept on...

whoa...nothing positive to say for me...lol

lol, iight well anyone else...? say positive

well fam...fix the struc iight //'s aint good

but i guess it was iight...about a 7/10...change it up

with the topic...I aint bout to scar you cuz you aight

for a regular rapper..but your flow was streched and fucked

remember to flow what you write back..and imagin a beat in your mind..

treat this shit serious fam...this is hiphop..and hiphop is life man..

use 100% on it..never rush a line nor word...

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yea i kno man, well if i had this as a audio it would sound fucken amazing, cuz i originally wrote it to a beat, it had amazing flow on that, and i kno...never drop a verse thats written, if it was origianlly a audio cuz its fucked up if its a writtin, but i dont kno how to make audios on my computer...

structure change would work.
Apart from that I like it. lyric's are good,content good.

keep dropping