http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1778410

YO Rise new site ,how you gone destroy this one
your flowz is the best,lyricaly noone fuckin wit you/
spit that heat kid


YO YO

My minds in verbal distress crazy flow in ill depth/
no mc can match my breath,sharp bladed words rip thru flesh/
lyrcial king aim for best.my mystic crush any foes thats left/

so fuck burring the hatchet,im like bullets from a wratchet/
cranium will get cracked in,my verse bringing the facts in/
murderous mc back in action a classic flow im deep so far in the blackness/
R.I.S.E.usin biblical tatics,revalations lyrical axises/
my verse chop heads off like a sword with the axes/
niggas waba get ahead so much that i had to rise by going backwards/

i took another route,from NY ,cali,and the new south/
back to New York,back with the pitch fork real talk/
cuz im bless, like NAS carry the cross, weak mc's gone feel the force.../left dead by a hearse door,who want war? im like a mind in the ocean i flow for shore(sure)so hard watch your spinal cord get torned/

this is my freedom of speech,im like a thousand disciples roundin
your street/loaded with heat,to face off with the rest of mc's
so who the first to leak step up to fall down unfold death L-Y-R-I-C-A-L--Y/
I got the spirit in me GOD LYRCAL CREW destroy many -enemies
my rep has been enveyed niggas wana space bar me/
delete a style that far from wack im ill im nasty/


this is my introduction ,writting to put hiphop back in function/
whoever want it wit me im crushin,niggas is LL COOL J just stay hushin,fagget niggas rhymes stay blushing,/
but mc's wana die my minds unstable im in a lyrical concussion
in a deep thought where my words is gona come out bussin
bullseye BITCHES so come rushin/


Holla my Intro what up to the whole site respect.1hun
R.I.S.E.

uppin for feedback

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I paint pictures with a deep mind and draw lines/that become rhymes,black words with clear thought true weapons retire nines/
my styles hostile like 2 lions,
then i rip mc's that be lien when they rhymen
rise heat the rap game like crackpots lyrics stay fryin/

overral battle record,18-12-10-k.o.
G.L.C.God's Lyrical Crew
We murder any mc' in any crew and any crew with a MIC...

R.I.S.E. the illest mc,death to mc's that ain't down wit me/

Holla
R.I.S.E.

real niggas drop real replies,


Holla
R.I.S.E.

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b

I paint pictures with a deep mind and draw lines/that become rhymes,black words with clear thought true weapons retire nines/
my styles hostile like 2 lions,
then i rip mc's that be lien when they rhymen
rise heat the rap game like crackpots lyrics stay fryin/

overral battle record,18-12-10-k.o.
G.L.C.God's Lyrical Crew
We murder any mc' in any crew and any crew with a MIC...

R.I.S.E. the illest mc,death to mc's that ain't down wit me/

Holla
R.I.S.E.

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b

I paint pictures with a deep mind and draw lines/that become rhymes,black words with clear thought true weapons retire nines/
my styles hostile like 2 lions,
then i rip mc's that be lien when they rhymen
rise heat the rap game like crackpots lyrics stay fryin/

overral battle record,18-12-10-k.o.
G.L.C.God's Lyrical Crew
We murder any mc' in any crew and any crew with a MIC...

R.I.S.E. the illest mc,death to mc's that ain't down wit me/

Holla
R.I.S.E.

couldnt really catch your flow, But the content is good. Rhyme's are good.

good shit on dropping a link aswell, needa see more people following your role.

good lookin son still uppin


Holla
R.I.S.E.

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b

I paint pictures with a deep mind and draw lines/that become rhymes,black words with clear thought true weapons retire nines/
my styles hostile like 2 lions,
then i rip mc's that be lien when they rhymen
rise heat the rap game like crackpots lyrics stay fryin/

overral battle record,18-12-10-k.o.
G.L.C.God's Lyrical Crew
We murder any mc' in any crew and any crew with a MIC...

R.I.S.E. the illest mc,death to mc's that ain't down wit me/

Holla
R.I.S.E.

uppin for feed back.


Holla
THE R

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b

I paint pictures with a deep mind and draw lines/that become rhymes,black words with clear thought true weapons retire nines/
my styles hostile like 2 lions,
then i rip mc's that be lien when they rhymen
rise heat the rap game like crackpots lyrics stay fryin/

overral battle record,18-12-10-k.o.
G.L.C.God's Lyrical Crew
We murder any mc' in any crew and any crew with a MIC...

R.I.S.E. the illest mc,death to mc's that ain't down wit me/

Holla
R.I.S.E.

Nice . .

Not bad . . nicely representing New york.
Even though I'm from london, yungin.

But this was only TexT . . If this was audio your flow would be terrible/off beat try doing an audio and you will see.

Decent vocab... Could have been better. Good Multi's

7/10

Keep Elevating.

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THUG LIFE, BITCH!

same here 7/10................................................ .......

that stuff was Cool, I do of course like all kinds of rap, 8/10

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I Love My Baby Boi...Fuck Wit Him -N- I'll Fuck Wit You!

yeah it was hard im wit ^^^......

Good lookin,much respect,but has far for audio,
i been there and done that,i finshed my album so im good on that point
but much R

Holla
The R

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b

I paint pictures with a deep mind and draw lines/that become rhymes,black words with clear thought true weapons retire nines/
my styles hostile like 2 lions,
then i rip mc's that be lien when they rhymen
rise heat the rap game like crackpots lyrics stay fryin/

overral battle record,18-12-10-k.o.
G.L.C.God's Lyrical Crew
We murder any mc' in any crew and any crew with a MIC...

R.I.S.E. the illest mc,death to mc's that ain't down wit me/

Holla
R.I.S.E.

This was okay.. very mediocre but you have alot of potentilal...
6.5/10.

keep elevating... dont give up.

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