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Old 12-03-04, 10:30 PM   #1
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yes...yall prolly thinkin damn...here this nigga goes wit anotha gangsta track...WRONG...just listen and leave feed...thanx in advance...

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Old 12-04-04, 01:09 AM   #2
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lol most def not a gangsta song.. shits deep i like ya utha shit aswell.. props.
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Old 12-04-04, 01:56 AM   #3
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listening to it right now....its pretty nice..i liked them lyrics....ya gottta turn up ya vocals tho....otha then that its nice.....about 9/10....
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Old 12-04-04, 08:33 PM   #4
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up...............
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Old 12-04-04, 08:53 PM   #5
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vocals need much more amplification

beat is lovely


the way u deliver the "punch" reminds me of Fabolous...


flow is fine...


try adding more internal rhymes...would make it more interesting to listen to


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Old 12-04-04, 08:58 PM   #6
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Definetely deep. I dunno. The voice distorter sounded kind of wack. I would think that your real voice alone would have worked better for a deep peice. It makes it more personal. But still nice nonetheless.
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Old 12-04-04, 09:08 PM   #7
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i liked it....good drop...i think that the voice level was fine AND i think that the voice distorter was fine too...good shit mayne...only thing that i think it needed was a chorus but oh wel....9.5/10
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Old 12-04-04, 11:22 PM   #8
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thanx....but ummm...no voice distorter...only my real voice...just a dubbed the whole verse...lol...thanx anyway.....
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Old 12-04-04, 11:58 PM   #9
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^^aw i wuz just going by wut neptune hurricane was saying...tha voice did sound like it was kinda messed wit but w/e....good drop
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Old 12-05-04, 01:35 PM   #10
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chea.. iw as feelin this.. wasent the usual gangsta, i can i feel you on that... lyrics were good.. flow was fine.. you just need better quality now hehe :P.. but u reppin fa sho man.. we need to collab soon.. word.. keep dropin nicely man.. -1
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Old 12-05-04, 02:29 PM   #11
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Beat is emotional.........

Hoood Vibe on this...Lyrics is nice.........Quality is ass..like mine...but am feelin on this shit....
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Old 12-05-04, 08:06 PM   #12
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i peeped this in the crew forum and left feed track is pretty nice mayne kaap em coming
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Old 12-05-04, 08:08 PM   #13
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this was a nice song, it was like a 2 pac song, very nyce voice, the flow was perfect, and ur lyric's was amazing, big up's to this song.. 9/10
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Old 12-05-04, 08:16 PM   #14
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I'm feelin this shit Bolic...secretlly you my nemisis and I despise you nigga

so me sayin this tight..it must be tight...peace...i mean war hoe
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Old 12-05-04, 08:16 PM   #15
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nice piece......the beat conveyd emotion into it...which amplified the lyrics..beat was hott..........the deep voice was just fine to me...it went along with the beat............keep it up.....9.5/10
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