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12-08-04, 05:09 PM
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magic
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POEM - MAGIC
elemental concutions are a alchemists productions sparadic punctuations create mythical potions superstitious concious thoughts, african bush lotions ma roots, feel tha soil, converse wit tha medcine man claims his workings are naturalistic, nuttin pretentious or sedistic constructin drinks from the plants in our environment fundamental ancient principles, nothin to ur detriment traditions, shao-lin, current culture under-pinned historical martial arts, the art of war and craft sorcerers of times future and past, creatin disappearin blasts ur powers have transcended to believers those now refeered to as blasphemous heathens faith a mental state of mind, switchin off becoming blind allowin ur fate in da hands of a spirit, its scary cos u cant c~it dats da foundations of magic, its belief, a fact tragic cos its not easy to believe in something u cannot c but like tha druids of scandanavia from norway to bavaria in circles hands we can hold, ancient stories can be told claclulations of ur own conclusions, reality or simple illusions magic is a idea, it cant b sensed, dnt try n listen 2 it with you ears see it with ur eys, touch it, or smell it wit your nose its a transient entity of force which nobody knows
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12-08-04, 05:41 PM
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Nikka U Blocking My Chance Of Getting Da Poem Of The Month Lol
J/p Keep On Dropping Props
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12-08-04, 05:55 PM
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haha drastic as long as one of da fam gets it...............
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12-08-04, 06:43 PM
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True True True..................................
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12-09-04, 05:24 AM
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IP:
uppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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12-09-04, 01:00 PM
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fbak ppl........................................fav alwayz returned......
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12-09-04, 01:42 PM
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nice topic, i haven't seen anyone post anything about magic before.. creative
i was feeling these lines most: magic is a idea, it cant b sensed, dnt try n listen 2 it with you ears see it with ur eys, touch it, or smell it wit your nose its a transient entity of force which nobody knows ^the only thing i would leave as advice is to refrain from using too many "big" words, cuz you wouldn't want people to have to run to their dictionary and look up half the words, plus it can mess with your flow at times.. but besides that, this piece was pretty nice.. Lady Fiya
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12-09-04, 04:23 PM
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4sho fiya............gud fbak.........ill cut down ova long vocab.......u aint left a link 4 fbak returned tho.....................uppin!!
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12-09-04, 04:30 PM
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mess with me get cooked
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yo ELUSIVE G HIT UP IN DA HOT 99.9 JAMZ NEED FEEDBACK QUICK~!
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12-09-04, 09:44 PM
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IP:
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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12-10-04, 06:59 PM
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up...................
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12-11-04, 05:11 AM
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IP:
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppin fbak always returned
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12-14-04, 11:00 AM
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IP:
uppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn
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12-14-04, 04:46 PM
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yeah, poetry gets slept on... Anyways, onto your poem.
Was very nice in the vocabulary and rhyming section. I liked the topic was very original and descriptive with what you had to say. Nice structure and it all went together nicley. Return the favor? Just a Vent
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