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Old 12-12-04, 01:37 AM   #1
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Exclamation Straight Foolin!!!

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(verse 1)
ayo...
im comin harder than yo momma did in her home movies
im done wit slappin niggaz, im just gone go grab tha tooley
thinkin you big? dat aint new to me
i done beat tha shit outta niggaz 300 pounds or more silly
and you cant beat me or join me nigga so stop askin
i'll kill hitmen hired over me to show im a better marksman
bet you didnt know i was yo pops man
yeah, it was a long ass line but i got there, say hi to daddy man
broker than folk eatin sardines outta tin cans
sleepin wit a bitch every night just for tha sex man
nigga im a lil too hard to touch, im dangerous
cant decifer if i wanna bust in yo girl navel or on her butt
critical thinkin got my mind bent, cant stay on track
sometimes i possess lil niggaz on some of my tracks
im a sick sick bastard, rap made me this way
been spittin since out tha womb, bitch get out my way!


(hook)
huntin dudez...grabbin toolz...bustin nutz...in yo foodz
you cant stop me, how can you?
its SR$ actin a fool!
im huntin dudez...grabbin toolz...bustin nutz...in yo foodz
WHAT THA FUCK YOU GONE DO?
im actin a straight fool!!!
~repeat 2x~


(verse 2)
nigga look in tha sky, its a bird, its a plane
nope it aint neither, its me blastin bazooka bombs, goin insane
nothin can knock me down mayn, my peddistall is up there
(up where, i dont see it) LOOK BITCH, ITS UP THERE!!!
believe me nigga dont it look like i tell tha truth
(no) well fuck you too then slut, wait till im in tha booth
i gone spit tha illest truth even tha lines about you
and you cant do shit about it can you?
(no, BOO-HOO-HOO)
yeah cry yo eyes out cuz in a minute im cuttin em out tha sockets
puttin dots on yo forhead like you was drinkin indian piss
will i ever get sick of this? NO
my own CD is on my wish list
i dick my own rips, no need for another ass to kiss (ha-ha)
i've been better than you in everything else
so whats tha cause of us, tryin to kill each other over rappin
is it just becuz, im tha illest teen in tha D you heard spittin since Obie?
or maybe its cuz SR$ dont believe what you write, i need you to show me
and if it aint that then what is it nigga, tell me, please tell me
im gettin angry, your not gonna like it when im angry
yeah...like i thought, now shove yo fuckin pride up yo ass
what am i doin? this dont make since, im throwin this verse in tha trash


(hook)
huntin dudez...grabbin toolz...bustin nutz...in yo foodz
you cant stop me, how can you?
its SR$ actin a fool!
im huntin dudez...grabbin toolz...bustin nutz...in yo foodz
WHAT THA FUCK YOU GONE DO?
im actin a straight fool!!!
~repeat 2x~

(talkin)
yeah...its dat nigga SR$ BITCH...srtaight from yo momz mouth...so when she spit you know im comin right?...yeah...Dem PlayBoiz 4life nigga...shoutoutz to K-GUTTA, e-roc, T-Rez, death aven, Pusha G, C-Row and my nigga duck i see yall...yeah...'05 to infinite...nigga...ha-ha-ha-ha...DETROIT CITY NIGGA!!!
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Old 12-12-04, 01:38 AM   #2
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lookin 4 mad feedback on this one yall...DONT SLEEP ON THA KID!!!
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Old 12-12-04, 11:50 AM   #3
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yall already know dat dis shit is HOT. i give it at least a 8/10 or better. get at me yall damn...
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Old 12-12-04, 12:55 PM   #4
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c'mon...whats really hood wit yall?
DONT SLEEP
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Old 12-12-04, 01:59 PM   #5
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it was iight...
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Old 12-12-04, 02:09 PM   #6
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i thought it was kinda weak
3.5/10
u gots some shit ta work on
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Old 12-12-04, 02:17 PM   #7
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^^^well.....WHAT DO I HAVE TO WORK ON?????
i mean, this shit is just somethin i threw together in 20min.
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Old 12-12-04, 02:36 PM   #8
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na your shits good, i like the style i just said it needs work cause you gave yourself an 8/10, but its straight, keep up the good work n give me some feedback
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Old 12-12-04, 02:58 PM   #9
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^^^oh good lookin. i only gave myself a rating cuz in tha flow i said "i dick my own rips, no need for another ass to kiss" but yeah. jus tryin to prove my own point...fuck it

okay...i need more feedback from yall. quit lookin if you aint gone write shit!!!
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Old 12-12-04, 05:36 PM   #10
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get at me.......
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Old 12-12-04, 08:47 PM   #11
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Old 12-13-04, 10:41 AM   #12
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on this shit u are straight foolin
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Old 12-13-04, 01:04 PM   #13
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^^^umm K, that was lame
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Old 12-13-04, 03:38 PM   #14
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i thought it was sry. you need more of a rhyme scheme. and make it flow a lil more.
you had some good lyrics so keep it up. ~1~
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Old 12-13-04, 03:38 PM   #15
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oh yeah if you wanna battle i'll teach you all about it!
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