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Old 07-10-02, 04:06 PM   #1
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compensating for the loss at hand i stand high but my soul is still crawling on the beach sand/ getting dirty getting pinched by black lobsters and stepped on by white kids/ told to leave places just cuz of the color of my skin/ my closest kin wiped out at age sweet 16/ now theres sorrows on sorrows packed in my heart like sardines/ let somebody else cross me without a gun/ blazing the heater b4 they kill my only son/ i aint having no more pain/ i cant stand by no longer never wanna see my blood die again/ so i stay vilagent to protect what is mine/ malign in my approach and refined in the techniques of time/ i wont be fooled by words or fake flattery from within/ charm gets u dead just ask my patrilineal kin/
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Old 07-11-02, 09:12 AM   #2
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Old 07-11-02, 02:12 PM   #3
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Old 07-11-02, 02:56 PM   #4
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Old 07-11-02, 03:01 PM   #5
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very powerful deep and hard hitting piece.....


....all else i can say is...i feel what you saying for sure...hard and deep...respect...
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Old 07-11-02, 03:06 PM   #6
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thx yo
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Old 07-11-02, 08:37 PM   #7
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let somebody else cross me without a gun/ blazing the heater b4 they kill my only son/ i aint having no more pain/ i cant stand by no longer never wanna see my blood die again/ so i stay vilagent to protect what is mine/

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Welcome to RB - PS,
Stay active!
U got much talent ..
This was a short poem but had
much depth to it ..
raw ..
Head up

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Old 07-12-02, 08:39 AM   #8
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thx yo
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Old 07-12-02, 09:37 AM   #9
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depth,,, in this joint mad nice feelin this...
stay reppin

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Old 07-12-02, 10:35 AM   #10
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truly an extremly raw and emotional peice... and i loved it... the flow was good and the vocab was awesome, but the emotion was strong and hard hitting.. i loved the message and everything... keep it flownin
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Old 07-12-02, 11:38 AM   #11
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thx yo
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Old 07-15-02, 08:38 AM   #12
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