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Old 12-13-04, 07:24 PM   #1
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Exclamation i want feedback on this...its HOT

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just a quickie i found in one of my flow books...hope yall like...I WANT MAJOR FEEDBACK ON THIS...cuz im tryin to find my style...4real

SR$, you can tell he's nice
Want enough dough to get my cell iced;
tote guns bigger than a hitman price
Droppin' mad bombs
Fuck safety, keep the gat on; .44 Taurus in my Phat Farm
Sucker, please, it's the D-P - fuckin' -Bs
They back puffin' trees' got your girl suckin' on these
Fool, be strapped, no way you can do me, black
Let the tooley clap, put one in your bourgeois hat
Put your brains in your fuckin lap
Like Air Max, I'm everywhere you be at, settin' booby traps
Holy shit! $ the black Moby Dick!
Yo, he's sick! Walk out the door, he get a, "Blow me, bitch!"
Fuck around, my crew might base
You should quit this and go back to school like Ma$e
Cuz at rap you suck, I'll have to clap you fucks
Make my octopus wrap you up, nigga talk to my nuts
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Old 12-13-04, 07:37 PM   #2
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ay da structure was uuuhhh,but madd props nigga
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Old 12-13-04, 08:46 PM   #3
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good lookin my nig. alright...let me hear (read lol) more feed...i need it!
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Old 12-14-04, 11:25 AM   #4
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i dont see shit else...c'mon
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Old 12-14-04, 07:40 PM   #5
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Straight up for real it was aight!! better than straight foolin! it had betta rhyme technique!!
and quit takin shit to seriously!
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Old 12-14-04, 07:52 PM   #6
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it was cool for a freestyle but u need to battle
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