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Old 12-14-04, 04:04 PM   #1
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Raising The Shackled THeme

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Wreck Leaves Verses Shackle These Peeps are Ugly Thats Why They Show Up
at night Like Jackals/
Your Bones Will Snap And Crackle And I'll Have You Burning Your Own Fort Like Little Rascals/
I'll Eat Your Bones You Must Be The Bitch In The Crew The Way Your Leader Makes You Moan/
This Nigga I Already Own Because I'll Have You Watching Rock T.V. Like FlintStones/
I Got This Hoe's Life-Took/And Kill You With A Knife-Hook//
I Got This Strife-Shook/This Wife-Is-A-Rook(Rookie)//

Come holla uppin or sumthing fams 1
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Old 12-14-04, 04:52 PM   #2
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Uppin....haha thats cool......
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Old 12-14-04, 04:56 PM   #3
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OK good verse....make some longer....you got potential...ok punches.....nice wordplays.......fix your struture cause its messing up the flow 7/10 fix your struture...upp your vocab......


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THE LINK ITS IN THE SIG


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Old 12-14-04, 04:58 PM   #4
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IGHT THANKZ man...
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