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12-14-04, 08:25 PM
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.::Outside The Circle::.
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Color of Love
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What is love.. a question often asked... Many Times i have been close to the answer.. but it eluded my grasp... Love is a Beautiful thing... Its the Essence of life... In the same sense love is dangerous.. it can change your life... I look for the answer... from the heavens above.. as the red blood drips down my finger.. i now know the color of love.. something short and quick.. but alot of emotion..
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12-14-04, 10:29 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP:
this is a dope poem,it was short, i wanted to read more of your thoughts..lol..love the words you used to describe love, and brilliant closer to tie this all together...."as the blood drips down my finger, i know now the color of love", hell yea
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12-15-04, 12:01 AM
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yawn
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IP:
Very nice, short... So will be my response.
You used so alright descriptions, and structure was nice. Nothing to complain about except I would liked to see more  .If you could hit this up it would be appreciated. Just a Vent
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12-20-04, 12:50 PM
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.::Outside The Circle::.
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IP:
uuuuuuuupppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn
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