Battle Rules:
30 min checkin
6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
due 15 min

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-16-04 at 06:06 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-16-04 05:59 PM.

hang-man has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-16-04 06:00 PM.

FREEZ DEF got room for improvement, ill settle on the bid
for christ sakes, shits enough to highlight an episode of cribs 1
played and stretched lines, ill smack this text geek
shits like a soap opera episode,- we'll catch the end of em next week 2
gettin smacked up, this isnt healthy is it?
so get HEAVY HITTA'S and we'll keep it strictly business 3
bite the dust, ya text is poor, truely
only hot PART in ya verse?, the part mentioning yours truely 4
Winning your hoping, beating me your dreaming
even then after your verse u awoke screaming 5
Slow ass fucker, aint hood... but claims he is
After all he's seen the block a few times... on my aim list 6 bitch hold that!

COMPLEX
I’ll Murder This ‘Cat’ With Liquefying Lacerations From Hazardous *Text*
Cut Off All ‘9 Lives’ And Chop His Body In Parts Then Ship Them With Fed *Ex*
Cause That’s The Only Way Ya Goin To Touch People Across The *Globe*
Leave Ya Body Oozing Red All Over Ya *Clothes* Makin Ya Look Like Ya Got The Boston Red Sox’s *Wardrobe*
Throw Down Metaphorical Grenades That Flash Like A *Strobe* And *Blow~Ya~Earlobes*

stop lil sumthing.........
my ~gun blowz~till ~lung blowz~ like jerseys in closets i ~hung pro'z~// think about it
da ~drum rollz~i "cause flames" like spills of rum on a ~hot stove~//
Slicing Hang-mans neck now
dis ~dumb hoe~ like a cold pussy dis little ~cunt frozed~//
i ~hunt those~to ~tuck souls~and buck more holes in you then ~ bum clothes~//
like your sister on her period, Hang is a ~annoying bitch~//
get ~boiled with hits~you forgot your laxatives cuz you was never in ~control of shit ~// ( holly shit )
JR is playin target practice
Dis ~basterd lies~get ~slashed to die~your life must be like girls gone wild cuz its ~ flashin by~// ( oh my god..lmao )
if rap was a film, you wouldnt "make da cutlike ~ plastic knives~//

MURder.....
I'LL reattach this hangmans head,then send him to mental-WARDs/
U couldN't be tha same as my skill if u turned your record Bac-WARds/
(OH SHIT U GEt ME 3-9 ,9-3 hahah sorry)

^^ All That Was, Pre-written U Bitch Ass Fag Thats A Weak Win If U Do Beat Me U'r Trash-man 4real

son pre written my ass jus because ur ass an slow dont mean i suc an i can do a free in fuckin 5 mins bitch an i'll prove it when i do audio so dont hate hoooooo.....

Damn Homie...structure i don't like but i used to use it so i ain't too mad...metaphors were decent...multies were on point though a few were stretched, your lines wurr a bit stretched..0-10 scale i give you a 8.5...

Best lines/Fav lines-
dis ~dumb hoe~ like a cold pussy dis little ~cunt frozed~//
i ~hunt those~to ~tuck souls~and buck more holes in you then ~ bum clothes~//
like your sister on her period, Hang is a ~annoying bitch~//
get ~boiled with hits~you forgot your laxatives cuz you was never in ~control of shit

Lines you Could Have Kept-
Ya whole opener except last two lines...

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^^^ the reason hes whole verse was good besies the last 2 lines its cuz he bit that shit and he thought it would be good to toss a personal in there that was weak as fuck cuz hes really weak as fuck and the person he bit from is aight

u's a LAMEEEEEEE

sorry i fucked up and didn't do it right....but for da record..J.R got my vote...hang-man i left alot of feedback but fucked up and it didn't post...

elevate homie.. and don't rhyme a word wit itself...but decent verse...

-Jus Truth-
D.Truth

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0-0 still upp'in cuz it aint my fult u fucked up word

hahah damn man u jus can't handle a loss right????its okay ur jus jelous.....ur a lame an a herb who tha fuck ryhmes bid an cribs ur sooooo fuckin basssiccccc an weak......

Nice...I cant vote yet because of my posts...but J.R Freeze would have got this if I could...

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Voted For: J.R. Freeze

damn dog dat was fasho,both verses came
hard but im rollin wit freeze he had more punches,
structure goes to hangman, but overall it was tight

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Voted For: J.R. Freeze

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