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my words are compound they hot now cause i got the know how/ to flow professionally i got a lot of people testin me/ but ya never gonna strip me of my credibillty i break words down mentally i got a sick melody/ and my technuique is flawless i spit heartless me and my partners/ in this rap game well alwasy remain were impossible to get out like a wine stain we mantiain/ the champonship and ya cant handle it/ we can do what ya want to do u aint even got a name who u/ i can lose all my maturity in a second and ya can hear me but ya dont get it/ that some one can tear down ya forces we rollin in pourches we burin sources/ step aside before i attack get ready to strike back/ but ya lose ya dignity ya punches aint even hiten me/ they dont leave a scratch ill have a body parts detached front to back/ we dope and ya cant even cope they full of shame i smash open ya cran-ium/ leave ya brains dangled and mangled i get labled/ but i aint ever gonna drop the microphone so just let it all go/
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This was not very good... your structure is hella fucked... up your vocab and shit...
but just keep writin' tho... You'll get better don't worry. 3/10
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uppppppin......
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Make your lines longer but not stretched. Dayum kid. Elevate. You'll get much better.
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IP:
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To bad you dont have any credibility here.. This could have been decent.. With a better structure, more multis, some wordplay, some good punchlines, maybe some imagery and/or emotion, a better flow, a good topic.. Pretty much goes to show that this sucked. |
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