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12-18-04, 01:21 PM
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20/20 VisioN
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Struggles- ft. Enygma, lady fiya, limited edition and 20 GraND
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ight here
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/20grandmusic.htm lady fiya - not finished yet limited - 1st 20 grand - 2nd enygma - 3rd holla at us LINKS: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165309 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=166522
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12-18-04, 01:31 PM
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Uppin' for some feedback on this...hott emotional track right here...
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12-18-04, 01:58 PM
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i wasent feelin the chorus at all.. quality was not to good.. i feel what ya'll tryna do.. but the chorus was kinda annoying.. no hate.. i love you fiya.. but ima say the truth... i thought enygma had the most enjoyable verse.. "it just preachin dog its practicin'".. i felt the shit outa that verse.. nice drop word.. for real.. 7/10 song i guess... keep droppin ya'll...
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Mixtape Pushed Back to mid september.. Holla at me for a copy still I'm felt cause im real. Can you say the same ? Prolly not.
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12-18-04, 02:52 PM
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sowwi 20 grand i must say sumthin....................... i'ma kill u, u shoulda kept the other version of the chorus.. this one off beat terribly even tho u say it sound fine, me disagree.. i'll edit this tonight, when u get off work and give u the times for the correct version of the chorus..
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12-18-04, 03:36 PM
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well i guees u did the wrong chorus thats y its off beat
wasnt really feeling les verse i just dont really like his audios dont no y lol 20 grand pretty good parts didnt flow to good in my opinon but over all pretty good enygma shined on this track good flow good lyrics yup good track retty good
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12-18-04, 03:38 PM
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A'ight well uppin' this track for more feed... |
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12-18-04, 03:50 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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i think its ur voice but id still do a track with u u got tight lyrics
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12-18-04, 07:37 PM
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I don't like my voice either. Good looks, JPoll, I'll keep workin' on that!  Uppin' for some more feed... |
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12-18-04, 04:47 PM
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ummmm...mainly wha Phoenix said...nice lyrics tho..
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12-18-04, 07:17 PM
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chrorus, blah i don't know what to say, its a good idea...good lyrics...off beat...like wow..
limited. ..decent, you really need to work on your breath control, you could be pretty nice because you have an emotion that works, but your way too choppy right now...work on your lines, because sometimes you were a little bit too slow then you'd rush through a couple of lines...it was decent though, keep improving buddy 20 grand... shit was really decent, you need a little bit more emotion, even with your typa flow, it was good though, but i notice in a couple of bars it seemed like you were just throwing in multies just so you had multies...but good looks enygma... wholy fuck this was nice, lyrics were dope as always, i could feel what you were saying emotion was dope as fuck, delivery was a lot better then you used to be, but the only thing was that even with the flow being good, you seemed like you were rushing to get everything out... no doubt pretty good song guys...keep it coming
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12-18-04, 08:20 PM
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i agree with jpoll on LE's verse
the chorus was horrible, and i couldnt even hear wat lady fiya was sayin.....i suggest slowin it down for the chorus, or atleast makin it louder... 20 grand was better on this than most, ur flow seemed fine, onbeat most the time..... decent lyrics, but i personally never think ur lyrics are that great God damn.... Y u always gotta have the last part Enygma to kill everyone elses verse.... straight fiya... i like ur really fast flow, and u keep it consistent is wat makes it good..... although switchin up the flow alil bit sometimes isnt that bad..... best lyrics + good flow by u = a 6 for this track fix that chorus and itd prolly be a 7 or 8 |
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12-20-04, 12:26 PM
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Thanks for all the feedback.....we'll try to impliment what you guys are saying to our next tracks
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12-20-04, 05:38 PM
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Upppn Disssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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12-22-04, 12:45 PM
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Uppin'....................
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