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30 Minute topical verse.. By Nostradamus.
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This shit was a topical against Razah on rcn, I wrote it at 5am in about 30 minutes. But I got the win due to a no show, so thats why I'm posting it here to get feedback.
![]() Enjoy. Take a trip with me, slip inside my shoes and walk a mile.. I’ve been punished, robbed of freedom, and beaten as a child.. My existence is wild, blistered by the system I grew up in.. Stitched lips in refugee camps, maybe pain will teach me something.. A profound substance, how blood boils when your depressed.. Betrayed my country and my people, now I’m constantly stressed.. Its all a test, some would say, that left me on foreign lands.. I’m holding hands, a broken man folding on no demands.. A flowing stance, growing impatient waiting for my chance.. To gain a voice inside my nation, to rally troops for an advance.. Fuck Sadam’s system of living, its giving me scars of war.. I need to unite, stand and fight along side my people for the cause.. Though haunting flaws, follow me every single place I go.. Nobody knows my own oppression, inside my soul it grows.. I was a refugee, formed into a leader of my people.. The rebel yell, standing up against currant government’s evil.. Not a sequel to my predecessors, I stand to improve my nation.. My brains racing, thoughts different to my facial demonstration.. Steady pacing inside my bedroom, my social life’s disconnected.. At any minute I could be dead soon, fuck being disrespected.. (BANG) “FREEZE!! HIT THE FLOOR!!” I saw a reapers figure.. I could of sworn After the flash of a trigger being pulled, my flesh was torn.. It was a stand off, I had an eagle aimed at a mans face.. He had an Mp5 sub, I pulled quick to save face.. The stage laced with bullets soon after I fell from grace.. I caught a glimpse of the dead body I shot, so out of place.. It was a damn shame, but life’s always been unpredictable.. Were just victims of fate, so what are we even living for? Giving all, I had into my nation with problems faced.. But in death, I realise life is more than just a waste.. I was 46, one single thought stuck inside my mind.. The phrase ‘Death Before Dishonor’ is why I died tonight.. So as I leave life un-lived, I take a laugh at fate.. The most important lesson in life.. ...........................Was simply learnt to late.. |
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Uppin... Why is no1 leaving feedback...
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Coz your Havocc...Nice verse wasn't bad for 30 mins work but do us 1 favour...go back to Nostradamus coz my heads confused...
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I have a lot to learn...
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It was fine... Stop bein such a textcee
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Word.. I left that gay site due to the overdose of nerds it had on it..
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I have a lot to learn...
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nerds are nerds................. ya know?
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Damn this shit is slept on..
No1 Reading it for some reason.. |
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what other site were you at? i been to alot. why don't ya get a original name too. i mean nostradomus and havoc are takin. just my 2 cents. as for ya verse for a 1/2 hour ya coulda done better. i usually write verses in 5 minutes, cause i freestyle all the time. supernatural like and shit. not as good though. what was the topic. war or soldier or something
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