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View Poll Results: crew battle: (I.D)Viscosity vs (N.B)Acuity (aka) Elusiv G
Acuity 5 71.43%
Viscosity 2 28.57%
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Old 12-23-04, 12:39 AM   #1
Viscosity
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Viscosity vs Acuity

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Old 12-23-04, 06:02 PM   #2
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Acuity has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 06:02 PM.
 
Old 12-23-04, 08:09 PM   #3
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Viscosity has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 08:09 PM.
 
Old 12-23-04, 11:32 PM   #4
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Wont have time to post any other day, or write any other day..
so here u go..
Topic: Rain...

*Childs perspective*
Clouds black, as mother nature swallows the sky, in an eternal beating
explosions in the night, soldiers fall onto the grass, causing dead plants to start breathing
children scared, as the city blocks are surrounded & flood'd, as rain marches to the sewers
sucked under the vexpipe, to indue new life, underground & persue a new strike...
while I drink this gift from God, my dad tries to fight, to survive from sinking under its might
im scared but love to sleep under the drizzle, to much is far beyond, while I love just the little
crackin off my window, & splashes down the screen helping anything grow thats green
I twitch when I hear a crackle smash in the sky, but as I sadden, the rain takes my pain
.& does itself to cry.


*Animal perspective*
No where to run or ride, but love as it trickles on my warm hide
sleep under the cool mist in the dawn, as my young fawn
drinkes the dew off a neighborhing lawn..
Jumpy as light smashes my forrage, & causes heat to hurt the green
that we've come to love & need.. but the water falling from the black
extingushe's the red as it continues to bleed, & spread to fast..
the plants seem healthier & vast as I watch the water spread threw the bricks..
slurp on the tracks filled with nicks, of left behind flood..


*Rain*
Far back as the dynosaurs, causing destruction to emerge
before man spoke words, we replenished the fruits for the herd's
beast drank to stay alive, & survive healthy, to chase the weak
the meek, sank as the reptile hid in our swamps, we created with floods
before there was... ...hate & knots, we flooded threw the Nile
to create feared legends, by puffed milds of scarcity..
God created us, & lighting married me, coming up with me
where I plunge into the midst, as clouds appear
people know were near, & run to closed off places
intricting fear, we keep things alive & also die
We were powerful before mankind found a place to store us
in this dark chamber, clean us, & leave us with waterlike creatures
drink us.. & hang us on your clothes, but need us, when were tear drops...
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Old 12-25-04, 05:32 PM   #5
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The Rain

It's been years since something was growing, no rains, no crops showing
Hard work unreflected, we're rewarded with land by God that is neglected
Our families are dieing of starvation, and despite many international donations
And our every frustration, nothing wants to grow on our plantations
So day-by-day one more dies of malnutrition, its a terrifying daily position
Awaking to see your kids rib-cage, because his skin hangs off him like he got the plague
Burying many before they come of age, disease florishes, 15per day die of AIDS
Fuck aid, governement keeps it, they living large cos they getting paid
Our only desire is a drip of rain, we aint needing another Oxfam campaign
From rain we have so much to gain, pre-domiantly the growth of our sugar cane
If we grew our own food, it would spark change, simultaneously lift the mood
It would break the cylical cycle of poverty, decrease our dependance, eleviate disease
Give us the means, to be self-sufficient and feed, our own and buy farming machines
If the rain came and then it was over, afterwards the sun would begin to glow
Buds would shoot, water would flow, and our crops would start to grow
Amazing the power of nature and the skies, its imerciful and knows not of compromise
What do I have to do to feel and trace, rain trickle down the contours of my face
Its cool liquitious form, refreshing the soul, land, allowing things to be reborn
Ressurecting us with its warmth, riches falling from the sky in a metaphorical silver storm
Often asked why we don't sever our ties, leave this land, say our goodbyes
But this outr place of origin,to leave, in the eyes of our ancestors is a sin
Moreover we settled here, its peaceful, secluded, nothing to trouble the ear
It is where we belong, and we will stay here until the very last one of us is gone
Sitting, dreaming of rains to come, and patter on the ground like a snare drum
Looking towards the sky, praying it'll quench this baron land that is dry
Hoping for the clouds to bestow ,their essential contents with us below
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Old 12-26-04, 12:55 AM   #6
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ight.. uppin for votes............................
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Old 12-26-04, 02:12 AM   #7
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checkin dem pollz up
 
Old 12-26-04, 02:21 AM   #8
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^wtf? why not vote.. the fuck the point o that is.. min post: 25.
lame ass
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Old 12-26-04, 02:24 AM   #9
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checkin dem pollz
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Itz Coopa Bang bitch and I done made a transition,
I smell what ya hattaz cookin but ya aint smellin what im wrippin,
The net fixin to burn cuz Bang in the buildin....




Me fallin off,start Trippin and slackin,
Nope that will never happen Just like the Pope Rappin......
 
Old 12-26-04, 05:57 AM   #10
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uppin for some votes.. god damn, somebody vote....
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Old 12-26-04, 04:31 PM   #11
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uppin for some votes.. bump.......................
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Old 12-27-04, 09:41 PM   #12
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppiiiiiiiinnnn....... ....
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Old 12-28-04, 12:17 PM   #13
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppiiiiiiiinnnn....... ....
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Old 12-28-04, 12:27 PM   #14
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Voted For: Viscosity

I like his flow better no affense I just think his topic hitting teeth grinding was iight. I like his strucutre his flow his opener to the closure and most of all he made it sound like as if I was their myself.
Look me up and check out my bats peace.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
 
Old 12-28-04, 09:45 PM   #15
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ight 1-0 me.. uppp....................................
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