yo wen u fall to deep in love//
everybody begins to push and shove//
tey keep sayin i want tis and i want tat//
tis is gettin a bit to emotional for tis kat//

wen u fall to deep and u begin usin drugs//
tha only things u want now r kisses and hugs//
but now ur layin in a hospital stretcher cause u over dosed//
tha only rememberence u have left is ur ghost//

tis is wat happens wen u fall to deep wit tellin lies//
noone carin about u and not givin u goodbys//
caused tey found out tha truth and now ur in jail//
spendin eternity until someone pays for ur bail//

wat happens wen u fall to deep in debt//
everything of urs gets redeemed and u forget//
to pay tha bills tat u needed to pay//
now ur livin in tha jungle and tha other animals think ur tha new pray//

tis is wat happens wen u fall to deep in a bet//
u thought u won cause tha table was set//
now ur getin capped and getin tossed in tha bay//
noone cares where u went and continue on there day//

tey dont care tat ur gone but tis is where everythin went wrong//
a new investigation started wen ur body was found on tha shores of hong kong//
now tha killers r bein traced cause tey went to deep in murder//
found out is wat ur wife so they decided to hurt her//

subject found guilty but pleaded inno-cent//
tha clues were found in tha closet vent//
tis is wat happens wen u go to deep//
but as of now all tha victims r put to sleep//

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this was deep dawg, much props deserved and given, like always dawg, you need to quit gettin' slept on, up your vocab a little bit, used creativity, peace 'n' keep spitting


signed,
~madd

yo thanx for tha input madd i dont kno y thesse kats keep sleepin on my pieces oh well uppin

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Yo you got alot of tis...thats koo tho. Yo, this peice was good, but to me it needs alittle more body to it. Be more descripted...It sounds more like a poem. But that you spoke of is true. Thats why theres a God to give us HOPE!! Only love. Much love and God Bless you...

uppin for more thoughtson tis piece and thanx for ur insight

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yo leo i spit tha way i do cause tats how i think em its all in ur head and tats how tey come out tha way there r

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uppin for more insigt from different peeps aight

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i liked it you have alot of imagination and deep thoughts each post projects it

well ive been workin on tat and i guess it shows thanx for ur input uppin

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yo we got like 4 posts new on here must peep me vs masterblaster collab then me and gambred under makeng know centz

aight i will

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uppin on wat others think

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uppin for others insights

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damn boy....that was amazing....really feelin it...wow....

uppin

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