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6 - 12 Lines
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g'luck fam...youll need it

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Originally Posted by Assas-Sin can you drop an honest vote on my battle against Blackmage....Ill return da favor if any of ya battlez need 20 post to vote..thnx fam

Assas-Sin has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-04 03:10 AM.

C'mon fam you beatin me?Ya must be gettin Dick votes
Cuz ya cant spit out sumthin hard even if a dick was in ya throat
^^that line was the only one i needed to merk ya ass
If Rap was a subject.Im Sorry Black but you would flunk dat class
I cant believe you register to rv.com and challenged me
I feel like a Role model since he looks up at me
And seeing how i am do to da fact
Ill leave ya feedback on TheWackestMC sayin how everything iz what you LACK
Bitch if you suck on my DICK all day you still wouldnt know how bein hard feels Like
So my last wordz from ya Role Model Just Put Down Da Mic

Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-04 03:15 AM.

you not a sniper or a ninja you gassed you a has been
someone should've told your ASS what you gettin your ASS IN
even though you an assassin you ain't shit in the dark
you ain't fire a lighter with no fluid'll still make a spark
i'm the shark of the battles i eat mc's that abuse it
i'll eat a rapper and his song piss beats and shit music
and i can smell blood and tears i hear the fear in your breath
sink down to my level you'll get crushed under these depths
it's tragic i spit magic and i kill mc's for fun
you in too deep 20,000 leagues under my gun
i'm through talkin my lips is sealed
after i drop you'll leave here seein spots like cruelle deville

thanks for the luck fam, hey no beef dog it's just business

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Voted For: Assas-Sin


Assas-Sin
Nice Verse, Some Decent Vocabulary In Here, Punches Was Hitting Kind Of Hard, Structure Was Fucked Up Though, Lol, And You Need To Throw Some Multi's Up In Here With Some Meta's, WordPlay Wasn't To Well, That Will Need Elivation On


Black Image
Coz, Your Punches Wasn't Hitting Verry Hard, Vocabulary Was Basic, WordPlay Was Alright, Throw In Some Multi's You'll Be Good Need More Work On Your Meta's And Shit Though...Over All Both You Need To Still Elivate But It Was Decent For A Newbie Battle

Vote=Assas-sin

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Voted For: Assas-Sin

assas-sin got this one fa sho its one sided naw just playin it was close ta me cuz blackmage had some cold ass metephors but i give it ta assas-sin

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Voted For: Assas-Sin

Ok Shit 4rm Tha Both Of You Black Ya Shit Wass Good So Wass AssAsIn But AssAsIn Verse Had Betta Punches,Good Personals Fix Ya Strukture And Both You Up Ya Vokab..................


Black Ya Verse Lacked Decent Punches Ah Mean Tha 1st 2 Lines Wass Good But Ended Off Bad Have Good Punches Throught That Whole Verse Ya Strukture Wass Kool Easy Ta Read Have Some Good Vokab Cus And Some Good Ass Personals...............

/V AssAssIn

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Voted For: Blackmage

umm weak battle ya'll...but dude took it......his first bar was da only good thing in dis battle..no creativity from both of ya'll

opener-black
structure-black..sin ya lines were 2 long
punchlines-black
wordplay-nun
multies-nun
personals-black da second line
finisher-sin..
enjoyed-black....

nuf said..links r in my sig return da vote ya'll

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^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: Blackmage

Yo my votes is fo Blackmage heres y

Opener:Black
Flow:Black
Structure:Black
Punches:Black
Personals:None
Closer:Black

Black got dis shit hands down......yo Assas-Sin u need to elevate homie no hate..........~1~

Return da favor links in sig

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those 2 last votez are unexplain...so they dont count....

uppin for sum more votez famz...letz close dis battle

Voted For: Assas-Sin

this is my honest vote right her
flow tie
rhyming tie
punches assas
opener-closure assas
personals assas
imagry niether
vocab tie

but over all assas and hit up on my link please peace.

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Voted For: Assas-Sin

i vote assa-sin...cuz he had better imagine...wheres the structure at?

structure:Blackmage
comedy:assa-sin
vocab:tie
flow:assa-sin

Blackmage had to much ordinary rimes but teres one line from assa-sin dat i was desapointed:
I cant believe you register to rv.com and challenged me
I feel like a Role model since he looks up at me

no hate but its the truth...anyway om an honest voter

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