Chorus: I'M SUPPOSED TO TRUST YOU in the crush shoes with the plush boobs all day all the dudes tryin to touch you I'M SUPPOSED TO TRUST YOU in the rough crews tryin to be tough dude talkin like you bust but i can bust to fool I'M SUPPOSED TO TRUST YOU trust dudes trust crews trust you trust rules what rules trust you dudes what trust

Verse: you can't be serious
until my demise
i'm still gon' be wise
and steal on these guys
but still they gon' try
to be me
they gon try to see me
yall niggas can't be me these babies is still premies
yall easy to read like golden books
wit golden gloves i'm throwin out goldin hooks who told you look
forget what you thought you know
these flo's ain't the only thing i sought you know
if you messin with the river you done caught the flo
and i wouldn't settle for less so i sought for more
i'm not fresh to death dog i'm terminally ill permanantly skilled
don't get extermanally killed
i can cock and lift and aim
cop the fifth and drain
pop and split the frame
drop and roll and stop
don't try to bring it to me hot
you actin like you got something i ain't got
and i'm a spit lyrical bullets until everybody drop
and everything's a go until everything stop what you thought it's the roc...
naw
maybe not
it's the freestyle circle
me and charm records we'll work ya
me and seven deuce will just hurt ya
you'll get your legs broke over five bucks in a church
so listen it's simple as this
yall niggas get off my dick
i'll let you eat
after i get off my brick
we the world's most dangerous click
WE
CHARM
DEUCE
get ya mind right bitch

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Some body post a verse and finish this song out wit me i know somebody out there got the skill

stcutre was off badly....your vocab was alright....nothing to great i would give your verse an...3/10....sry gotta be honest...no hate tho

yea ur strucutre was off but u know what...if u read it the right way then ur flow was veerrrrry easy to grasp (good thing).....sounded like a freestyle to me....i used to flow like this when i 1st got into hip hop and i wrote my stuff down on pad and paper

now i just use microsoft word.......anyway keep lookin at the type of stuff i do....1st thing u wanna do is get a topic...second thing is that u wanna stay on it...and last thing......which is an advancement no one here on the site can do.....learn wordplay.....look at my piece hip hop warrior or final review to see what im talkin about

if u need more guidance....u know the name hit me up......im far more advanced with wordplay than anyone on here...can elevate u with ease

d.a.

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It Wa Spreety God Man Rhyming Was Kinda Basic Flow Was Kinda Off Structre Was Good Next Time Try To Shorten Ya Lines Make Em
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