this place i see aint life this is a contorted vision//
im mor then wishin for life to end so i can abort this mission//
money swirlin, girls r watchin dyin aint even a choice//
high off of death smoking ignorance is the only way i rejoice//
is it death my crooked line coverin my pupils in hate//
or livin strate followin jesus christ headin for pearly gates//
the brink of oxegyn's extinction stayin focused is hard//
dont hate my flesh because my bodys created by the rib of God//
i sway and falll i pray and call for teh light to stay up tall//
but grey is all i see and what i feel may not exist at all//
a shot ringin from the opposite block murderous shots//
i thought this was hell,this is life? no wonder i taste the smoke of murderous rocks//
i had to be born, my heart had to pulsate eventually//
swallowed by God's traps for the weak i murdered myself intentionally//
daughter 2months coming, my brothers' got a thirst for my blood//
under the storm but i feel the heat, the spray is hailing above//
doctors aint shit to me just smart people who create long death//
all i got is my heart but now its gone so now i speak wrong breaths//
why did i have to come i thouht shit was cool, this niggas a star//
wrong this niggas got a child wit no other shit but his heart//
the women fucked, money fucked me again//
i wanna say i fucked the bible, but the bible wasnt a close friend//
peace to the murderers, peace, to all the times i was screwed//
rest in peice to me cause i aint got shit everything i speak is old news//

holla at this kid, 1luv.

tight peace no doubt

really strong images in this:

the brink of oxegyn's extinction stayin focused is hard//
dont hate my flesh because my bodys created by the rib of God//

originality as well, a few more multis wouldve been cool but this piece was tight like the cat above me said.

got to keep posting.
pzz.

thank you, elevatin

please dont sleep yall, 1luv.

nice peace flowed well gud use of wordplay holla @ a collab im in

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=16099

good look, elevatin, could i get some feedback??/?, 1luv.

tight shit man my favorite part was

women fucked, money fucked me again//
i wanna say i fucked the bible, but the bible wasnt a close friend//


keep it up holla at me for a collab sometime lalacrazy876@aol.com ~1`