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Old 07-14-02, 05:59 AM   #1
Da NFamous
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Life aint shit

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this place i see aint life this is a contorted vision//
im mor then wishin for life to end so i can abort this mission//
money swirlin, girls r watchin dyin aint even a choice//
high off of death smoking ignorance is the only way i rejoice//
is it death my crooked line coverin my pupils in hate//
or livin strate followin jesus christ headin for pearly gates//
the brink of oxegyn's extinction stayin focused is hard//
dont hate my flesh because my bodys created by the rib of God//
i sway and falll i pray and call for teh light to stay up tall//
but grey is all i see and what i feel may not exist at all//
a shot ringin from the opposite block murderous shots//
i thought this was hell,this is life? no wonder i taste the smoke of murderous rocks//
i had to be born, my heart had to pulsate eventually//
swallowed by God's traps for the weak i murdered myself intentionally//
daughter 2months coming, my brothers' got a thirst for my blood//
under the storm but i feel the heat, the spray is hailing above//
doctors aint shit to me just smart people who create long death//
all i got is my heart but now its gone so now i speak wrong breaths//
why did i have to come i thouht shit was cool, this niggas a star//
wrong this niggas got a child wit no other shit but his heart//
the women fucked, money fucked me again//
i wanna say i fucked the bible, but the bible wasnt a close friend//
peace to the murderers, peace, to all the times i was screwed//
rest in peice to me cause i aint got shit everything i speak is old news//

holla at this kid, 1luv.
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Old 07-14-02, 06:06 AM   #2
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tight peace no doubt
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Old 07-14-02, 06:43 AM   #3
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really strong images in this:

the brink of oxegyn's extinction stayin focused is hard//
dont hate my flesh because my bodys created by the rib of God//

originality as well, a few more multis wouldve been cool but this piece was tight like the cat above me said.

got to keep posting.
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Old 07-14-02, 08:22 AM   #4
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thank you, elevatin
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Old 07-14-02, 10:30 AM   #5
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please dont sleep yall, 1luv.
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Old 07-14-02, 11:23 AM   #6
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nice peace flowed well gud use of wordplay holla @ a collab im in

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=16099
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Old 07-14-02, 05:45 PM   #7
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good look, elevatin, could i get some feedback??/?, 1luv.
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Old 07-14-02, 06:27 PM   #8
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tight shit man my favorite part was

women fucked, money fucked me again//
i wanna say i fucked the bible, but the bible wasnt a close friend//


keep it up holla at me for a collab sometime lalacrazy876@aol.com ~1`
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