peep dis fo real
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/20grand.htm

Omen is 1st and 3rd and does da chorus
20 GraND is 2nd verse




LINKS:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167485
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169448

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

this dope as fuck,dope beat,dope flow,good quality,

8/10 doope

thnx for feed UPPN DIS hottness

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

yo, ididnt even know you posted this till now. yea, i came with this shit for real. this is what to expect from me from now on when i riggidy riggidy rock tha microphone peice. 20 came ill on tha shit too.its a banger. this is a must peep tho for real so pleez peep it up n drop links, pleez give props where they are due, recognize tha journey of progression. lol nah im playin, but fer real feedback on this would be madly appreaciated. pz peeples

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best Audio Head May- the Omen*

OMEN ON MYSPACE

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come on when u peep it, leave feedback plz, least u can do....

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

yo fer real. ive left mad feed to almost everybody on this site. we put some effort into this peice. sumones gotta peep this n leave me some feed. hold me down pplz

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best Audio Head May- the Omen*

OMEN ON MYSPACE

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upppppppppn, you know its hott so just say so lol

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

Omen, ok flow, line up dubs better and get a pop filter to smooth out the mic catchin your breath, ok stuff tho

hook, decent, starts out a lil weak but it's solid

20, ok verse, work on your breath control so you can say more than a few lines at a time instead of record each set on top of each other, it works good sometimes but it took away on this song,

Omen, pretty much same as first verse, flow's a lil bit better, but yeah work on gettin a filter in front onf your mic.