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01-03-05, 09:12 PM
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Rastafari Walk Tall
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Love Is for Ever
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Love Is Forever
Thanks to Love,I feel like I've touched and felt each and every individual star Floated in the sky,Conversed with the constillations, travelled to random galaxies Its as if ive laid to rest on the clouds, and condescendingly looked down Upon the world, knowing that at these very moments i'm untouchable Judging in contempt, those that stride before me like a ruler on his bench I feel like in my palm I grasp an eternal flame, and no-one can dim its glow Change its destiny, or listen and appreciate its tender movements and tones In ur prescene i feel like light is shining out of each singular pore Bathing onlookers in our spiritual,emotional, and physical bond, love for all These reasons explain why my love is such are overwhelming powerful feeling It cant be ignored, its so beautiful and natural, its like it has a power of healing With its swift strike from Cupid's eye, it pushes people towards a better life Causes many to make a sacred bond in our soul's epic journey or carriage Embarking us on a life-long commitment, sworn by vows, to eachother in marriage A gift bestowed upon us on by whoever it is that resides above So valuable its priceless, symbolised by many by the morning flight of the dove By the pure redness of the heart, but it cant be constricted in an internal body part Our Love will survive, the apocalypse, the coming of the anti-christ, armageddon It will last in the subtleties of the breeze when the seas with blood have reddend When the barriers between the existing planes of life are destroyed and knocked away Our Love will endure, and find a place safe, to ly in rest, prevail another day Safely in the very grains of the soil beneath our feet, it'' be there in the times bitter sweet With its magnificent strength and power, helping to complete the incomplete It is going to guide us, light the darkest paths, aid us in our every endeavour The before, is why love is eternal,unstopppabe,indestructible, it is why love is for ever
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01-03-05, 09:12 PM
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IP:
Feed It...........................
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01-04-05, 06:32 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
seems frimiler how ever you spell it but:
ok hmm that was tight i like your few last lines there....they were done well with vocab and your stucutre was tight....nicly flowing...maybe use multis give it mad flow i wanna do them to but its hard...but yea keep it up you had some good drop here...maybe we should collab i hear you got audio so we should do somin...but for your topicals keep it up your pretty skilled...8.4/10 look for my topicals i might throw them in my sig again but yea Unsuitable Life..check it if possible |
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01-05-05, 10:19 AM
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IP:
fbak left Paralell thanks 4 ur feed man.........................bump...........
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01-05-05, 10:21 AM
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IP:
hot poetry fam i like t o see people get in touch with their inner feelings and bring them to life for us good looking 9/10
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01-05-05, 10:32 AM
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Light Weight
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IP:
nice drop on that. liked how it flowed. could've been a lil better w/ it but it still flowed nice. nice vocab on dat 2...pc
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01-05-05, 05:00 PM
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IP:
thanx 4 feed ppls............cud hav been a lil better what? u didnt say....lol
bump...
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01-05-05, 10:14 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
i liked how u used da vocab w/o makin the flow sounds bad
very nice overall |
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01-06-05, 05:49 PM
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IP:
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^^weerd thanx 4 da feed man,  bump.........
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01-10-05, 08:27 PM
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IP:
nice poem, it's good to see a guy express himself through poetry.. this poem brings joy to any reader from the first line, that is, if they experienced love in a similar way you have.. you have nice imagery and energy pouring throughout this poem.. and you have a wonderful way of making a simple message sound appealing.. content is very well written.. i see you as one of the rv underdogs of poetry.. lol.. i would like to see another poem from you, some time.. keep at your works aight..
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01-10-05, 09:18 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP:
this was beautifully written,again i see you've let go and shown your emotional side, you have my vote for poet of the month so far, until i see anyone with as much skill then you, keep droppin....1
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