If heaven gave my heart one wish it would be to take you away from all your sorrows/
to put all your aches and pains on my back/
when you fell, babygirl, i'd take the impact/
But I know I havent been treating you this way/
its like i forget how to act im sorry what more can i say/
Forget the past hurts and disappointments change the way your thinking/
as long as your mad my heart is steady sinking/
I told myself i wouldnt treat you like the others/
I didnt want to be a reason for your issues/
for me to be close like a brother/
when you cry id be that shoulder to lean on id be your tissues/
Friends are suppose to be true, i messed up, because first i liked you/
but I checked the inside, rearranged it, im rdy to start something new/
Friends? plz you gotta say yes/
To a friend from a friend i just had to get this off my chest/

ps

id rather risk the chance of there ever being an US then to lose our friendship.

uppin

not bad. i got much respect fa u on dis one. i undastand where ya comin from. keep it up.

one

by tha way...dat was from PAPISWIFEY....RB wont let me get on my own name again. one

thx yo

upin

yo doggy i told u imma always hold you down. dis wass positive. "when you fell, babygirl, i'd take the impact". dats my favorite line....... well its wrap. uno

thx yo

that waz coo

ay, K...
I was really feelin this piece a lot..you cant go wrong when you put emotions like those in with a flow like that..i was feelin everything you were sayin..nice, powerful ending..nice, powerful verse..much propz...ill keep an eye our for more of ya writez..peace.

uppin

Awww, dis was tight ...
diggin it ...
Hope she returned ur love,

Head up,

Pz
~1~