UNFORTUNATELY THIS IS THE ONLY WAY ILL GET MY SHIT LOOKED AT:
I'm hear the lyrical angel, god-like handels, in beach sandals
hold heat like solar pannels, meltin candels, im a scorchin vandal
or am i just talk,come at me in shock, your body ends up lined in chalk
Armed like a set clock, full buttstock, so you stuck like a con in a cellblock
or i mean the hole,your girl i'll cajole, control your life with my console
or wack rhymin remote control, aint no loopholes, cause O you'll extol
Relieve my tension, by shatterin your insides, Os1ris always heart- wrenchin
im internets non-mentioned,so im tryin to connect like bridge suspension
Dont need a caption, the real action, leavin the crowd pickin up yo fractions
Slippery wording stops your traction, and reaction, so my Ak-47 i unload packin
Well this probably wont get rated, left to one vote than faded, again jaded
So im not all star stated, just decided to drop somethin, that i wanted to be stated......

damn cuz...dat shit was straight fiya, mos def...i gives it a 8/10...

i give it dis because yo multi's was off da fuckin chain kid...yeah its hot 4real...keep it up...leave some feedz on my shit (they in tha sig) ~1~

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Detroit PlayBoiz (DPB) 4 life nigga.....and im out

Money Fiend Ent.

thanx for lookin out my nig

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Detroit PlayBoiz (DPB) 4 life nigga.....and im out

Money Fiend Ent.

alll i'm say is nice mults

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man it was good but u didnt adress the title of ur song once.

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yup...nice multies...and lol @ the topic...ima say that worked...

1bruh

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haha wtf....nothing real good..he had no multis multis are good vocab that rhyme in a better rhyme theme not just multiple rhymes placed in different spots omg hhaha

^ wow at this "legend" or do i mean long time emcee here at RV who is overrated probably the most and only liked for his friendship with indeph and his sig all i can say is wow.....

yeah i like it duke u came hard in this 1 & u address ur emotions in this drop continue 2 rep "Grand Hustlaz" 2 the fullest fam
also make sure 2 return the favor in my open mic

os1ris...your the bitch on rapmusic that accused me (brayle) of biting....do your fuckin homework before you try to look cool be exposin people...when really there ain't shit to expose...


by the way..this was decent

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"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

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good rhymes lyrically solid, i like the title too.
your flow was different, but it worked it was easy to tell what your spitting. the title got the attention and your rhymes didnt dissapoint, maybe I should a title like that!

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