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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-14-05 at 10:18 PM

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Ebonicz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-05 11:22 PM.

siting thinkingwhat to righnt as i ponder my possible Ebonicz
so im sorry about my spellin im just took aa for phonicz
now let see i im contesting this wicked one
so if i win don't be portestin don't pickin son
cuz if you try to go against me il slam ya like shaq
you'll be so mentally disorder you be jammin off track
youll be hidin under table the when you hear about BIG E
so don't worry if i don't hit hard it not biggie
cuz you'll still be tha chump in my siggy
so ill put my defensive down and and rip you up
cuz when you spit ur wicked rhymes ill trip you up
and have you coplainn it your wrost battle ever
but still ill beat to the ground and you head severd
then i rape you mother wit a fish net rubber
father your brother and then another
ill have 3 kids and a dead step son
so ill stop now do i don 't kill ya rep son

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.Wicked One. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-05 03:13 PM.

Dude you a punk whats going here. the its takin hella long fuck you prewriting this shi fo sure dude honestly you said you needed time you got a life but hell man if you a true freestyler it should take you und 40 mins to drop minimum that like tellin yo teacher you didn't have time in ya weekend to do homework fuck you got hella time

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Voted For: .Wicked One.

.Wicked One.- Nice wordplay and punches decent homie. Flow was chopped up fam, elevate your struture fam. Decent verse from those punches and wordplay.


Ebonicz- You need to elevate on punches, cause you came basic. Elevate on grammer cause i didnt understand your shit. Punches was basic and played out. Flow on the otherhand was good. Although the punches was played.




overall=Hands down to wickedone he had harder punches and decent wordplays. Ebonics on the otherhand came with basic and played punches. Wickedone hit harder. No hate. peace.

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RTF THE FAV WICKED ONE AND EBONICS. HONEST VOTES PLEASE, NO HATE VOTES FROM YOU EBONICS.


PEACE

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Voted For: .Wicked One.

winner- wicked one

flow-tie
opener-tie
finisher-wicked one
multies-none really
inner rhyming-wicked one
finisher-wicked one
metaphors-wicked one

You could have Jonny Cochran write your battle.. you couldn't defeat me...
I'ma beat this bitch if he drops a "Line" like what Bobby does Whitney...

nice metaphor, punch was aight

I'll leave ur condition critical,u with a gat that's Pitaful,damage from ur punches is minimal...
Don't fuck wit a convicted criminal my thoughts are passed subliminal with eatch syllable...

good inner rhyming, punch was aight

You said stop with smurff rhymes, Learn how to spell Loss, first...
I disperse worst and murk this net nerd,Send you to hell in a hearse...

inner rhyming, punch was decent

Battling me was your first mistake,
Second mistake trying to act MC when ur a fake Ill break ur mother's bones like eathquakes...
Ill give you nike Gloves a gun with a bulltet and you still couldn't do it for fuck sakes...

good punch, liked this line

Please kid you think iam prewritin...
Manye, i gotta life kid, unlike you, cuz you prolly bit your verse off Mike Tyson...

very nice finisher, good punch

siting thinkingwhat to righnt as i ponder my possible Ebonicz
so im sorry about my spellin im just took aa for phonicz

ok punch, should get some inner rhyming or multi's going

now let see i im contesting this wicked one
so if i win don't be portestin don't pickin son

pretty good punch

cuz if you try to go against me il slam ya like shaq
you'll be so mentally disorder you be jammin off track

good punch

youll be hidin under table the when you hear about BIG E
so don't worry if i don't hit hard it not biggie
cuz you'll still be tha chump in my siggy

nice punch

so ill put my defensive down and and rip you up
cuz when you spit ur wicked rhymes ill trip you up

sorta a multi

and have you coplainn it your wrost battle ever
but still ill beat to the ground and you head severd

not that good of a punch

then i rape you mother wit a fish net rubber
father your brother and then another

decent punch

ill have 3 kids and a dead step son
so ill stop now do i don 't kill ya rep son

good finisher

pretty even battle, could have went either way

can yall vote on my batte vs each, honest votes only please

Voted For: .Wicked One.

siting thinkingwhat to righnt as i ponder my possible Ebonicz
so im sorry about my spellin im just took aa for phonicz
decent
now let see i im contesting this wicked one
so if i win don't be portestin don't pickin son
err…no here, flow needs to be longer
cuz if you try to go against me il slam ya like shaq
you'll be so mentally disorder you be jammin off track
okay, kinda good here
youll be hidin under table the when you hear about BIG E
so don't worry if i don't hit hard it not biggie
cuz you'll still be tha chump in my siggy
LOL….no mayn
so ill put my defensive down and and rip you up
cuz when you spit ur wicked rhymes ill trip you up
decent punch
and have you coplainn it your wrost battle ever
but still ill beat to the ground and you head severd
okay, nuttin good here
then i rape you mother wit a fish net rubber
father your brother and then another
no
ill have 3 kids and a dead step son
so ill stop now do i don 't kill ya rep son
decent closer, nuttin much

You could have Jonny Cochran write your battle.. you couldn't defeat me...
I'ma beat this bitch if he drops a "Line" like what Bobby does Whitney...

I'll leave ur condition critical,u with a gat that's Pitaful,damage from ur punches is minimal...
Don't fuck wit a convicted criminal my thoughts are passed subliminal with eatch syllable...
decent opener, flow was kinda long though
You said stop with smurff rhymes, Learn how to spell Loss, first...
I disperse worst and murk this net nerd,Send you to hell in a hearse...
nice multi’s here, decent punch
Battling me was your first mistake,
Second mistake trying to act MC when ur a fake Ill break ur mother's bones like eathquakes...
Ill give you nike Gloves a gun with a bulltet and you still couldn't do it for fuck sakes...
good punch
Please kid you think iam prewritin...
Manye, i gotta life kid, unlike you, cuz you prolly bit your verse off Mike Tyson...
…decent closer

overall, W.O. took this one, came harder in the punches
and had a better structure + flow

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Voted For: .Wicked One.

Ok... Wicked obviously gets my vote.... to begin with.... Ebonicz looks like he juss flowed for his verse and did it in like 3 seconds with no real good metas or punches... plus Shaq lines are really played (but atleast u didnt say his punches will miss like shaqs freethrows)..... also Ebonicz had a pretty simpe rhyme scheme.. ALso, ive heard that "Fishnet Rubber" line before..... i think on BET freestyle friday but i cant be sure... but i know its been sed before, so watch out on that biting kid....

Wicked had a well thought out verse with metas and punches throughout it.... and a brief spot of multis in it to make it a well rounded verse...... i think ur closer was alil weak with the biting=Mike Tyson thing..... but even that bar was better than most of EB's shit..... I believe the only thing that EB beat u on was flow and structure, as ur lines dont match up that well length or syllable wise throughout the whole verse.... but u definetely took this battle easily in my eyes


OHH and i dropped an honest vote in ur battle...... so id Greatly appreciate it if u dropped one in my battle with CALI..... the link is in the sig.... thanx

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Voted For: .Wicked One.

Aii Yall This is What It Is ....................
Explanation
Wicked one Came Harder WitH the Punchez and personals .......Alot Of Things he said Was Damn Near Dominent over Ebonicz verse A good example of that is his best punch Bar Which was
You could have Jonny Cochran write your battle.. you couldn't defeat me...
I'ma beat this bitch if he drops a "Line" like what Bobby does Whitney...
Which really set off his verse wit a Nice kick so I Had to go wit wicked one on this one

While on the other hand You got ebonicz he didt really come hard and his pucnhez didnt connect really good and thats why He came short in this battle i cant say much on his behalf because really its kinda hard to explain why you lost So

PLEASE RTF IN TH LINK IN MY SIG B4 YOU GO AND CELBRATE YOUR VOTE LOL BUT UM PLEASE DO RTF PLEASE I REALLY DO NEED IT BCUZ MY BATTLE IS GETTIN SLEPT ON LIKE BEDZ SO PLZ RTF