Battle Rules:

1-2 minutes
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-19-05 at 11:43 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

upin when is da due date i need to know

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Marvelis has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-05 12:03 AM.

A.K.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-05 12:15 AM.

soundclick uploading my verse right now so i'll have it up soon

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ok i got it............................................

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/jerseydevilsmusic.htm
the only one on there. it's kinda low so turn the speakers up

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dude you need help or something? where you at?????

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yo i did my shit www.soundclick.com/themarvel

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time for people to vote

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yeah thats wha;s up let get some votes. dude i heard you verse and all i could hear was you saying your name

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Voted For: A.K.A.

aight.... u can tell this was both yalls first audio battle but not bad... heres my break down:

Marv... it sounded just like u were reading it straight off the page brotha... get that shit memorized and just spit it man... that hurt ya flow.. the sound quality was good... punches and personals were pretty good but could have been better... vocab aight but like i said. ya biggest problem was flow and mic presance, it sounded like u were tryin to be quiet... beat was aight.... 4/10

AKA- what.....? cant hear you.... goddamn i had to turn my shit WAAAAAAAY up... but once i was able to hear it your flow was touchy but it was ok, work on that and your mic presance... punches and personals won this for you... they were pretty dope... good vocab and shit too... good beat just up on the sound quality and the mic presance and youll get there

no hate to either of you... good battle

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Voted For: Marvelis

marvlis..................this was the fucking sorriest battle ever....you both suck...but you win becuase his shit is longer than 2 min....so tell strobe to dq...this battle

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Voted For: Marvelis

Look this shit is easy as hell to vote on seriously..

A.K.A.. That was wack as hell..
1. Up the volume.
2. Learn some mic control.
3. Actually rap, dont just read your lyrics quietly..
4. Write some better lyrics..

If you cant do this shit, then stick to text straight up.. It sounds like your parents dont know you rap so your trying to be quiet or some shit.. Seriously, its wack..

Marvelis- Ya shit wasnt amazing, vocals were pretty good, but I aint into that slow flow you got goin man it made you fall off the beat at times.. Kinda makes you sound docile n shit.. Lyrics wernt anythin amazin either, but work on ya punches n shit and youll have it down.

Shit should be enough to get you a KO this time anyway..

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Voted For: A.K.A.

lmao....... ima vote like Marvelis...... AKA got this...... altho u need turn ur shit up.... ur first three bars killed his wholel thing...

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