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Old 01-19-05, 04:42 PM   #1
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Darkness Of Life

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shades of darkness now embedded in my brain
the precipation of the rain,is smybolizing pain
accomidating chains,of deppresive inflictions
progessive inscisions,with their opressive intentions
excessive conditions,still could not endure this
the heats evolving torrid,the pains evolving horrid
lurin,me into the harsh reality of the end of time
darkness is alive,and theres no light switch to find
ya visions blind,realitys frightening and hard to face
ya heart'll race,when u ponder death so u start to pace
hardly dazed,but drunk off my ass without consumption
my assumption,is havin these thoughts was just too much shit
no time for resumption,cuz forgiveness is forbidden
horrendousest of visions,in my head..hittin it relentless
its sicknin and its visious,when u have to face the facts
cant make it back,if i could have 1 wish i'd erase the past
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Old 01-19-05, 05:10 PM   #2
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Good drop, maybe bit short but it's nice...Vocab was impressive, had dope multis in there which definately improved your flow. Structure was good and emotion was raw. Topic was cool too, was easy to relate to for everyone I think.

Good job girl, keep on holding it down for the ladies!

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Old 01-19-05, 06:19 PM   #3
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short n sweet. tight as hell and deep at tha same time.......damn is there even any need for you to drop? i mean it's gonna be fire regardless of what it is. lol my favorite part was

ya visions blind,realitys frightening and hard to face
ya heart'll race,when u ponder death so u start to pace
hardly dazed,but drunk off my ass without consumption
my assumption,is havin these thoughts was just too much shit
no time for resumption,cuz forgiveness is forbidden
horrendousest of visions,in my head..hittin it relentless

overall i give this piece a 9/10 cuz i dont give 10's no more but keep doin wut u do shawdy n return tha favor. 1.
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Old 01-19-05, 09:30 PM   #4
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thx fo da feed.
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Old 01-20-05, 10:27 AM   #5
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upppin fo feed.
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Old 01-20-05, 10:45 AM   #6
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definately nice one there.

Keepin up to your usual standard of greatness.

Great vocab, deep lyrics, I was feeling ya verse while reading it.

I liked this line for some reason:

lurin,me into the harsh reality of the end of time
darkness is alive,and theres no light switch to find


Keep it up girly, your on top of the femcees in my mind
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Old 01-20-05, 11:34 AM   #7
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thx fo feed.....
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Old 01-20-05, 01:38 PM   #8
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Weerd...short and sweet...Good drop ma...nice vocab and imagery...good shit...1
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Old 01-20-05, 05:42 PM   #9
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thx............
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Old 01-22-05, 03:16 PM   #10
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Old 01-22-05, 06:22 PM   #11
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that shit was dope as fuck too. For real this shit is tight as hell.
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Old 02-07-05, 08:39 PM   #12
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short shit but it was good. Nice vocab and i was feelin the content. I was a little thrown off because i would be reading a line with multi's and try to predict the next line and it wouldn't be it so creative use of vocab. Nice drop.
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Old 02-18-05, 05:27 PM   #13
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str8 dopeness ma u held it down 4 "GRAND HUSTLAZ" i like it overall quality was hot keep up the good work
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