bomb shell casing around me im fire personofied//
my mic purity is only comparable to my religion, bonafide//
walls against my side tight roping lyricism perfection//
words speak the heart those who lack the connection are only guessin//
i sit and laugh at stupid jokes while blood is being shed//
should i feel perpetually sullen because another human beings dead?//
imagine a nation of thugs considered a world power//
unifying every ghetto every one with crack, dope and a flower//
utilization is tamin spirits while ignorant eyes cannot see//
the ultimate task force of words manifested thru me//
its been sed what i speak is a poem my words worthy of the pearly gates//
but its unfurling hate that keeps my lyricism in lucifers crates//
i sleep in roswell cause my intergalactic knowledge is not yet known here//
for being hot and sicker then the average enemies think i show fear//
gaurenteed to deliver illness like aids poisoning my motherland//
not just guns but microphones can leave nations in genocide from this undacova man//
1luv.

This was tight son. ur vocab was nice and actually made sense and not just using big words to make it seem like ya intelligent. concept aint original but u handled it well. the only main criticism i could really say is u need to use more effective multis. anyway liked it and check mine ninja philosophy aight peace.

thank you for tha only bit of recognition, elevatin

yo tis was hot feelin everyline u worded it well and it came off ill aight keep it up

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let thy tactix slip life falls apart/


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Truth In Parellel Lines Of Ryhme.
I Admire Your Creativeness That Does More Than Just Define.
Keep The Flowz A Flowing...
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Peace Out

Already Stated But.....Good Job W/ Vocab...Some Cats Use High Vocab and Forget about makin sense....Holla At Poetic Scriptures

thanks for the posotivity yall, elevatin, 1luv.