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J.R. Freeze 5 100.00%
cinnamon20ohio 0 0%
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Old 01-22-05, 08:51 PM   #1
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J.R. Freeze vs cinnamon20ohio

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Old 01-22-05, 08:52 PM   #2
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cinnamon20ohio has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 08:52 PM.
 
Old 01-22-05, 09:05 PM   #3
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J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 09:05 PM.
 
Old 01-22-05, 10:20 PM   #4
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starting it up.......
I’ll *Fracture* Ur *Vertebrae* Cuz The Day You Have *My Back* Is if You *Steal My Spine*/
Your *Tickin* Me Off So I’ll Beat You *Clockwise* Until My *Arm* Stops N’ You *Run Out Of Time*/
This *Fake 2pac* Aint *Killin Me* Cuz Unlike His *Death* Your Verse Is *Victimless Crime*/
I’m Jabbin You With *Ice Picks* You Won’t Win Cuz This Is One *Mountain* You *Just Cant Climb*/
It’s Like Your *Runnin* On A *Treadmill*..Your Rap *Ain’t Goin Nowhere* Except *The Next Decline*/

SSStoppppppp.....
Ill Rip This Kid Like A Smoke That Ain’t Lit, You don’t Spit Flames Cuz You Forgot It Exists/
Call Me A Janitor - I Can’t Feel Yo Shit, Ima Zip Lock This Battle and I Just Sealed It/
Hot Lyrics Like I Took The Ice Out Your Tea, Cant Dodge Me - Ill Rip The Cap Out Your Knee/
Considerin You An Emcee Is Make-believe, Like Reaching Orgasm Its Somethin You Just Cant Achieve/
Sex Change Kicks In N’ You Start To Conceive, Huff Huff Breath – Death Begins N’ Yo Killer Was Me/
I Still Haunt You In Your Worst Dreams, The Day Your Safe Is When You Wake Up N’ Scream/
Covered In Blood Fresh From Your Splean, I Guess You Could Say I’m The Extreme Cutting Machine/

MURDDAAAA<<<<
Before You Post A Diss Realize *Who You Messin With* Cuz I Promise The *End Of Ya Existence* *Aint A Myth*/
N’ If You *Don’t Stop* and This *Beef Persists* *I’ll Insist* to *Sit Back* and *Reminisce at This*/(Gameeee oOOOOOoooovvaaaaa)
 
Old 01-25-05, 07:00 PM   #5
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'jfreeze when its all over ull be on dem knees beggin me
ta stop callin u out just so u can keep ya diggnity'
sence u push accept i gotta give u more props/
Theze niggas round here woulda done called da cops.....
My rhymes is like a murderous sniper i am to slaughter
''Oh look there ya moma'' oops..accidently pulled tha trigga n shot er//
Your rhymes is fake got me thinkin if u copy n paste nigga usah fuckin waste//
I know if u in with ''black queen''u can get a vote and have some laughter
'oh look''theres drama feen chasin afta
stuck up blacks ass so far u would think it was a pasta(cattle)//(kinda reminds me of jack and jill jumpin down hills just to get there thrills hiding in ditches smokin crack
thats the truth in fact thas good they got each others back but when they voten for each other cheatin thas whack)
If thas the only way u can win go ahead
but just to let u know my flow will break u like bread
As i sit back and watch u crumble and crack on ya head
yuD be wishin u kept ya fat ass in bed //
ZwannaB, blck queen, drama feen all talkin bout droppin cinny
but in real life there no stoppin meh got in the end ull be wishin i wasnt the enemy//
talkin bout u all hard hittin ill use u up just like ur ah stolin credit card and watch u drop when i put u through the slot im so slick i dont get caught //
Jfreeze i cee u bitin ya lips usah afraid when u start ta spit
ur ass gonna slip cause u know u getting riped off mah shit //
U should be on mtv's made b4 u end up getting jaded and see urself slowly fadin
Boy go get ur 30mins of fame
and learn how to play the game
''Jfreeze my friend duece wants to get up in ya dome
wants me to pull the trigger and watch ur brains get blown''
Just cause i use self-glorification there no need to be hatin
at least my ass aint the one flaken

1ma honey dipped bitch that dresses fresh to deaf from my head to my kicks got all these trick bitches jealous cause they fellas aint given em no sex they be tellin me u they X dont worry i aint bout to step cause i dont want sumfin thats been fuckin a trex(tranny)
^^^''Jfreeze breathe easy''^^^
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Old 01-25-05, 07:28 PM   #6
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze

my vote goes to jr freeze i give it to him because his verse was more exciting and it caught my eye more. he had better punches and the metaphors was good and easy to understand. cinnamon had better flow and personals but freeze had better Punches thru out the whole verse
my vote_JR FREEZE
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Old 01-25-05, 11:33 PM   #7
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uuuuuuuppppppiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn............... ..
 
Old 01-26-05, 09:30 AM   #8
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze

jr freeze gets my vote he had a way better verse
punches hit harder disses were nice personals were good

cinnamon your whack you really suck
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Old 01-26-05, 11:24 AM   #9
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Why the fuck do you mention me (n Black Queen) in battle against another cat? Hop off our clit boy!
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Old 01-26-05, 11:36 AM   #10
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Drama ill do what i want so go fuck yourself trick
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Old 01-26-05, 03:42 PM   #11
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Originally Posted by cinnamon20ohio
Drama ill do what i want so go fuck yourself trick


Whatever you say but this shit won't make you win any battles because half of the people won't make the connection to your previous battles so don't bring that up. But you're right: do whatever you want but don't say I didn't warn ya...

Upping this battle for you guys btw...
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Old 01-26-05, 02:03 PM   #12
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze

interesting battle but my opinion is like diz:
opena: jr. freeze
punches: jr. f
personals: jr
multis: jr
structure: jr
closa: jr
jr just came alot harda den u did cinnamon but if u elevate da next time u'll get my vote ight
 
Old 01-28-05, 02:41 PM   #13
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uppppppppiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn thiiiiissssssss.....,.........
 
Old 01-28-05, 04:10 PM   #14
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whut da fukk y u spit like 100 bars?? damm....4 no reason...and both ya'll structures is crazee but ya cinnamon ya shit is worse than jr.'s..cinnamon u look like u stepin ya shit up but alot of lines u said were just wack first fix ya structure then ya ryhme scheme and work on ya punchlines try da be creative with it fam....jr ya shit was hott u didn't hav any personals and ya punchline concepts were original but dont make ya bars dat long u gotta work on dat but u took dis cuzz of creativity...

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Old 01-28-05, 05:40 PM   #15
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze

JR took this one hands down. this battle was clearly onesided...JR had harder punches, harder mettas, harder multies...u name it, he won that category. i was lovin tha structure of this verse. a lil diff. from tha average RV structure...you came illl....good shit. i think this verse was flawless
cinnamon20ohio-dumb name, and ur verse was kinda too long for nuthin. i think u shouldve came a lil harder. ur punches were soft, and i didnt see any personals in this shit. i think u should elevate more on ur structure, cause in text battlin, that means alot...but overall, ur verse was ight, i just wasnt feelin it, and i think u should elevate in a lot of places....
overall-i think this battle was clearly JR's...he kinda killed him in tha first 2-3 barz, and after that, i knew who tha vote was going to...good shit, and keep elevating yall..

AND PLZ RTF ON BATTLE IN SIG. I TOOK MY TIME OUT TO VOTE ON THIS. I HOPE TO SEE U IN THAT THREAD VOTING...OH, THA ONE AGAINST CJ, CAUSE TOO MANY BATTLES ARE GETTIN SLEPT ON...SHIT, VOTE ON EM ALL IF U LIKE...LOL...I KNOW YALL PROLLY Aint, but IF U WUNNA KNOW WHICH ONE TO REALLY VOTE ON...THA CJ ONE...THATS A CREW BATTLE...
lemme get outta here caue im talkin too much...just good shit people...and keep elevating...
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