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01-30-05, 03:03 AM
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...Simply The Best
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Final Destination
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hard to live even as my eyes receivin n jus readin this...
cant find da definition of life...i guess mines meaningless... who supreme in this?..if i died who gets da greivences... i say we all jus fucked...without da soap or da penises... poof ya gone in a instant..right after u got into princeton... before cops got u in prison..heart stopped u lost all ya vision... darkness orbits ya eyes..u'll die dont try its all a surprise... if i was u i'd be like cats dyin of AIDS n start ya goodbyes... life could be over so go to sleep n u might fall in a coma... this life wont let ya 'Win-Free' unless ya karmas like Oprahs... vains gettin thin n pains gettin grim as ya days dim at their brim... invincible cuz u swole?..God'll lift ya soul like u do weights at da gym... dont be careless..cherish every moment before u perish... be scared of God..be like Robert n be followed by a Parish... death can diminish ya worth..but i think conviction is worse... i know i'm next..n i have a feelin i wont finish this ver...
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01-30-05, 03:05 AM
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IP:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174700
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174740
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01-30-05, 01:20 PM
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this was nice man, some good multies you had in there. Some good creativity too, nice flow and structure, the drop was good, 9/10
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01-31-05, 01:22 AM
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IP:
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01-31-05, 04:36 AM
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IP:
readin this and...
hard to live even as my eyes receivin n jus readin this... cant find da definition of life...i guess mines meaningless... second line was real dope^^^^^ this was overall a pretty good drop man..feelin the flow, emotion in it is nice...the vocab is good...lyrics feel deep to me, pretty good...overall this is a dope piece man...keep droppin!!
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01-31-05, 04:48 PM
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IP:
^^no doubt...uppin..................................
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01-31-05, 05:34 PM
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IP:
OMG i think im Bout to Cry LOL ..............BUt N e ways Im Feelin Like everybody Else feelin And thats that ya opeing Really Was good and ya Ending Was perfect ya body lines were good so Ill give ya a 9.5/10 Bcuz you didnt Really come wit soem good Vocab to keep up wit that Level That ya verse was on
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02-02-05, 09:30 PM
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IP:
thanks for feedback...uppin.............................
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