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01-30-05, 04:21 PM | #1 | |
I walk & walk over you
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Please Girl
IP:
some quick shit, not my best, i just had to let it go......
I’m sorry, about the way I treated you When you walked out the door I went blue Girl my heart wasn’t in the right place writing this, to tell you I’m a change man I felted like I didn’t have a rose in my garden After each day, my heart like an bread it softens Sitting by the phone hoping you’ll give me a call I’ve walked in a love ditch, without looking I fall Baby girl, please I still believe in you and me I want to make this relationship like glue, sticky My life is on a brick wall, I just cant move on Without you my day’s are not like the sun All I see is gray clouds with tears falling It was sweet having you, but the bee’s stopped humming Like a picture of you in my head, I just cant forget you My pool is green, you gone, my life is forever blue PS.JANIEA “I LOVE YOU GIRL”
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01-31-05, 06:57 PM | #2 | ||
<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP:
aww, yea, i feel you on "just having to let it go", nice work here man, some emotional yet, sweet words, hope everything works out, nice job on this..stay up.1
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02-11-05, 02:56 PM | #3 | ||
Odi et Amo
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IP:
Awwww...this is mad cute, emotion was strong and I love those short drops that come straight from the core. Hope everything works out for the better but this was definately sweet. Keep it up fam...
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