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01-30-05, 10:36 PM
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...{God Of Death}...
IP:
Flames ignite, when i write these non-fictions
Giving sight, to the blind with such descriptions You say you dont take advice, well you fucken better Cuz it's be nice to read "Mass Murder" as a News Header Brain squeezin, Lungs Heaving blood out your mouth Keep breathin, cuz your leaven this world without a doubt Murderous thoughts, Emcees have Faught, but lost drastically Fuck The Cops, These Pigs could not take me Sarcastically Im Not Sayin that Im Not Slayin these Emcees to rest But stay Prayin Cuz im Remainin the fucken God of Death a little keystyle, hit me up for a Collab |
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01-30-05, 11:08 PM
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New to RV
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IP:
give some feedback...
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01-31-05, 04:35 AM
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Light Weight
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IP:
line structure was aight...lyrics are tight for an audio drop, not sure if they meet the standards for text...but this could be improves and maybe maked it a bit longer...but the vocab was pretty nice..overall, take ya time on ya pieces more...keep droppin em
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01-31-05, 08:54 AM
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IP:
thanks man, any more feedback
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01-31-05, 10:21 AM
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IP:
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