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Old 02-01-05, 12:17 AM   #1
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BOYS PT.1 (ft One Step Beyond)

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so one girl and two guys
with these aspects in mind
just remember whats truth
and what you told as a lie





:One Step Beyond:
You ain't a chickenhead.. slut.. hoe.. bitch.. or gold digger,
And my past relationships were way to short and no bigger,
Than anything to care about, but i just didn't know when ya,
Entered my life, and you grab my whole heart, so go figure,
I can tell you feelin me, and you know im feelin the right way,
I get the feelin im ya mans, regardless of what others might say,
I remember you said im the best after you been through others,
Baby you gonna be special to me, wether we friends or lovers,
And you gettin to know my bestfriend... damn what a sweet thing,
He tells me you a good woman, and like the perspective she thinks,
So we all gettin along... im sure it couldn't get any better,
Back and forth im at ya door, we constantly writin love letters,
We might grow to like others, but like others we got rights to,
I like you, vice versa, im sure if you was lyin, id see right through,
In the past i woulda forgot all these chicks, wished it coulda been you,
But why am i gettin the feelin its too good to be true?


so one girl and two guys
with these aspects in mind
just remember whats truth
and what you told as a lie


:Untraceable:
this one day at skewl my boy told me about this girl who was off the hook
but look there is a reason behind not judging a cover without readin the book
because i for all i knew is that it was my boy to whom she had her eyes glued
so i sat with her alone and parked my lust but she wanted the drive through
just then i knew that in reality i was in her eyes view and we talked more often
so without pausing i went on and tried to persue what she had been flauntin
my emotions were taunted and everynight it was my dreams she was hauntin
entering without caution i took those dreams and made them to what seemed
to be reinactions of my dreams but i wasnt to keen on the whole bedroom scene
thoughts that she'd flee if she found out the real me but really i needed to know
that she was a hoe and she had planned to go before my emotions were thrown
right out the window of opportunity blowing to the past is where they've gOWN(gone)
the future is unknown for anything can change within minutes to and instant
for instance me and her had nothing together until that day she broke the limit
without finishin what we started the next day it was my boy with whom she departed
and thats where the ties with two friends and this random girl...had gotten started


so one girl and two guys
with these aspects in mind
just remember whats truth
and what you told as a lie
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Old 02-01-05, 12:23 AM   #2
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Old 02-01-05, 04:44 PM   #3
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uppin for ffeedback ladies and dudes..............
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Old 02-01-05, 06:00 PM   #4
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i really liked this
flowed well
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Old 02-01-05, 06:39 PM   #5
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thanks man but yuo coulda left a lil more feed.....lol.....leave links.....ill return the feed.......
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Old 02-02-05, 04:47 PM   #6
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Old 02-04-05, 08:03 PM   #7
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uppin for feed..... don't sleep...................
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Old 02-06-05, 06:38 PM   #8
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bump bump bump..
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Old 02-08-05, 04:07 PM   #9
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up up up up up up
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Old 02-09-05, 08:21 PM   #10
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Old 02-09-05, 08:29 PM   #11
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damn...dis was a hot collab...i was gettin into dis one 4real...both had good verses wit flows to match and for dat i'll give yall a 8/10...now dats whats up...*damn, collabs is takin over Open Mic!*

and make sure yall leave feed in my newest collab...da link in sig...onestep, upp our collab real quick too (niggaz is sleepin cuz)...and trace, leave feed in both if u can...all my links in tha sig...get at me cuzzoz...~1~
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Old 02-10-05, 01:13 AM   #12
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Hot Fire Lit This Shit Up...man Keep Elevation Up And Comin Illest I've Seen Yet. Oners
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Old 02-13-05, 09:17 AM   #13
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elevate.......pfft im better than you more than likely......but w/e leave real feed next time.........uppin
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Old 02-13-05, 09:49 AM   #14
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this was a real thorough open mic from u two. i liked ya verses cuz they created a good picture about what the topic was. basically yall told a story about the topic which makes the whole thing sound better when it actually makes sense. some parts could of flowed a lil better but altogether good drop from both.
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Old 02-13-05, 11:59 AM   #15
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i was feelin this drop. yall both came hard. n both verses went wit the topic which is a plus.i like how yall kinda built up a scenario which makes the joint more realistic
good drop*1*
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