I'm feel lost/
make your brain bleed out sauce/
this time is my time their know last result/
feeling gulity/
I make your mind feel all empty/
take your life away and remmber it as mamorizes/
assaintion/
killing people with half faces/
prostatition laying down on the ground to make payments/
the crazy thing about this world/
killing people after people every boy and every girl/
young people having babys/
sometimes I realized mybe my mind is going crazy/
I hope everything that I say is the truth/
chose the right path it will set you loose/
Ha tkilla is like no other/
as the way I freestyle can't nobody hold me down/
you can tell that my style is so tight/
I'm the one that killed superman with a cripdanight mic/
you think this rap game is an issue/
I'll burn your face up make you look like freddy kruggear with burn tissue halla

im going to the top of the chart halla

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Ya just need betta structuring (like I told you) holla at me

Ok rhymins though

i wasnt feelin it dawg...u need to really elevate...3/10

and if u think im hatin...im not...and RETURN THA FAVA ON MY OM's...links in my sig...get at me nigga

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Step ya game up, get off the gangster shit too, its aight ta use gun talk n stuff every now n then, but uhhh, you gotta use em too good effect, which you did not, but you'll come good, keep workin on ya flow
thats all i can suggest

Peace

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