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Old 02-08-05, 05:49 PM   #1
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Acuity Track (Two Beat Switch Up)

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Battle Against Acuity....
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Old 02-08-05, 06:19 PM   #3
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Listening...interesting beat haha...some mideivil shit goin there...nice quality...very clear...flow is good...punches are funny haha...nice shit...haha keep it up...tell me when your ready to mix the Choke When You Spit collab...RTF thanks...

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Old 02-08-05, 06:35 PM   #4
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flow is a lil off at times, lyrics are good, and quiality is pretty good, i like da beat
overall good dis mayne
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Old 02-09-05, 12:10 AM   #5
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BEAT=DOPE...OTHER BEAT=dope

lyrics=so far they are not that good...
so far pretty nice......alot better than what you did in our battle......

NEW BEAT LYRICS= lyrics are alot better.....but it semms like you tiried to hard to fit lyrics....but its nice........



emotion=emotion on both beats semmed very good...nice confidence....

this was a very decent battle.....i can tell that you tried alot harder with your lyrics...but nothing seemed to catch my attention....i wouldnt listen to this more than once....

but pretty decent...
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Old 02-09-05, 03:38 PM   #6
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alrite thanx for the feed y'all appreciated..........


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Old 02-10-05, 12:27 PM   #7
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Old 02-11-05, 12:06 PM   #8
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dope track .................bitch...lol

was feelin 1st half over 2nd half...didnt like 2nd beat or ur flow on that but overall u did rip it..overall - 8/10

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